We could preserve the feel of "modern life" by doing something like this: The Internet has become integral to communication, collaboration, education, entertainment, business and society as a whole. (124)
I liked the modifier of "modern life" because I think we all know that all of those things could exist without the internet so the absolute statement doesn't ring as true as one with a qualifier. On Tue, Sep 24, 2013 at 10:13 PM, Nicholas Nethercote < [email protected]> wrote: > On Mon, Sep 23, 2013 at 10:03 PM, David Flanagan <[email protected]> > wrote: > > > > That's 116 characters--two characters shorter than the current proposal. > If > > it was up to me, I'd also re-order the list to go from more general to > more > > specific parts of modern life, and take advantage of some consonance: > > > > The Internet is integral to communication, collaboration, education, > > entertainment, business and society as a whole. > > I like it. > > Nick > _______________________________________________ > governance mailing list > [email protected] > https://lists.mozilla.org/listinfo/governance > _______________________________________________ governance mailing list [email protected] https://lists.mozilla.org/listinfo/governance
