On 24/09/13 01:51, Stacy Martin wrote: > Hi all - Thank you for all the feedback. I've consolidated it into > the following revised recommendations. I think we are pretty close > on agreement for 1-8. I tried to stay with the originals when we > could, thus I did not change #8 to add "the Internet" because I felt > it still made sense as a standalone without it. Let me know if you > strongly disagree, or if you strongly prefer an alternative for #'s 9 > and 10, where we had several alternate suggestions.
Hi Stacy, I think the current draft is fine to ship as it is; that's not to say that some of the tweaks suggested in this thread are not worth taking. > #1 - The Internet is integral to modern life: education, > communication, collaboration, business, entertainment and society. I'm happy with this; I think the loss of "as a whole" is acceptable. I agree we should standardize our comma usage :-) > #9 - A balance between commercial profit and public benefit is > critical to the development of the Internet. I like this too. Gerv _______________________________________________ governance mailing list [email protected] https://lists.mozilla.org/listinfo/governance
