Hello Michael and Karen
Please consider figures 18 & 19 I proposed below with the tunnels more isolated and the PDAO messages written in full. I believe that’s what we need to solve Michael NS issues with those.
A bientôt;
Pascal Hello Michael
The skew seems to be coming from tabs in my editor. I reviewed your changes and have no issue with them.
I believe that we need to add a P before or above the DAO the figure 18 like below:
18 would become
------+---------
| Internet
|
+-----+
| | Border Router
| | (RPL Root)
+-----+ | P- ^ |
| | DAO | P-DAO-ACK |
o o o o | | |
o o o o Ingress o o o | ^ | Projected .
o o o o o \\ o o o | | P-DAO | Route .
o o o o \\ o o o o | ^ | .
o o o o o Egress o o v | P-DAO v .
o o LLN o o o |
o o o o o Loose Source Route Path |
o o o o v
figure 19 looked OK to me but maybe like below it is clearer?
------+---------
| Internet
|
+-----+
| | Border Router
| | (RPL Root)
+-----+ | P- ^ P-DAO-ACK
| Track | DAO |
o o o Ingress V |
o o o o o o X o X Source-
o o o o o o o X o o X Routed
o o o o o o X o X Segment
o o o o o o o o X X
Egress
o o o o o |
Target
o o LLN o
o o o o all the best;
Pascal
Michael Richardson <[email protected]> wrote:
> I found though:
> Figure 3 seems askew, the ^v route between S and D is hard to read.
> Figure 4 is better, but might also be better aligned.
> Figure 7 has skew and some other issues... like this line of ._- under
> "Southbound API"
> I checked .html and .txt to be sure it wasn't just the red/green markup.
> Figure 18... not sure if there is a problem.
> Figure 19, definitely a problem.
Hi, I edited the XML slightly, and put it here:
https://www.sandelman.ca/tmp/rfc9914-authors-fixed-figures.xml
I think it fixes 3,4,19.
I fixed some things on figure 7.
I don't know if I got 18.
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Michael Richardson <[email protected]> . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting )
Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide
-- Pascal
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