All good to publish Karen! Many thanks ! A bientôt;
Pascal > Le 1 avr. 2026 à 20:13, Karen Moore <[email protected]> a écrit : > > Hi Pascal and Michael, > > We have updated our files to reflect the changes to Figures 18 and 19 that > Pascal provided. Please review the updated files (in particular, the changes > are easy to view at > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-lastrfcdiff.html>), and let us > know if this is agreeable or if any further changes are needed. > > Michael, we have noted your approval of the document on the AUTH48 status > page. > > > —Files (please refresh)— > > Updated XML file: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914.xml > > Updated output files: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914.txt > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914.pdf > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914.html > > Diff files showing all changes made during AUTH48: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-auth48diff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side) > > Diff files showing only the changes made during the last edit round: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-lastdiff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side) > > Diff files showing all changes: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-diff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-rfcdiff.html (side by side) > > Best regards, > > Karen Moore > RFC Production Center > > >>> On Apr 1, 2026, at 7:09 AM, Michael Richardson <[email protected]> >>> wrote: >>> >>> >>> Michael, we now await your approval of the document. Once your approval is >>> received, we will ask IANA to update their registries to match the edited >>> document before moving forward with publication. >> >> Everything looks good to me. >> >>> Diff files showing only the changes made during the last edit round: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-lastdiff.html >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side) >> >> -- >> ] Never tell me the odds! | ipv6 mesh networks >> [ >> ] Michael Richardson, Sandelman Software Works | IoT architect >> [ >> ] [email protected] http://www.sandelman.ca/ | ruby on rails >> [ >> > >> On Apr 1, 2026, at 12:39 AM, Pascal Thubert <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> Hello Michael and Karen >> >> Please consider figures 18 & 19 I proposed below with the tunnels more >> isolated and the PDAO messages written in full. I believe that’s what we >> need to solve Michael NS issues with those. >> >> A bientôt; >> >> Pascal >> >>>> Le 21 mars 2026 à 10:26, Pascal Thubert <[email protected]> a écrit >>>> : >>> >>> Hello Michael >>> >>> The skew seems to be coming from tabs in my editor. >>> I reviewed your changes and have no issue with them. >>> >>> I believe that we need to add a P before or above the DAO the figure 18 >>> like below: >>> >>> 18 would become >>> >>> ------+--------- >>> | Internet >>> | >>> +-----+ >>> | | Border Router >>> | | (RPL Root) >>> +-----+ | P- ^ | >>> | | DAO | P-DAO-ACK | >>> o o o o | | | >>> o o o o Ingress o o o | ^ | Projected . >>> o o o o o \\ o o o | | P-DAO | Route . >>> o o o o \\ o o o o | ^ | . >>> o o o o o Egress o o v | P-DAO v . >>> o o LLN o o o | >>> o o o o o Loose Source Route Path | >>> o o o o v >>> >>> >>> figure 19 looked OK to me but maybe like below it is clearer? >>> >>> ------+--------- >>> | Internet >>> | >>> +-----+ >>> | | Border Router >>> | | (RPL Root) >>> +-----+ | P- ^ P-DAO-ACK >>> | Track | DAO | >>> o o o Ingress V | >>> o o o o o o X o X Source- >>> o o o o o o o X o o X Routed >>> o o o o o o X o X Segment >>> o o o o o o o o X X >>> Egress >>> o o o o o | >>> Target >>> o o LLN o >>> o o o o >>> all the best; >>> >>> Pascal >>>> Le sam. 21 mars 2026 à 02:50, Michael Richardson <[email protected]> a >>>> écrit : >>> >>> Michael Richardson <[email protected]> wrote: >>>> I found though: >>> >>>> Figure 3 seems askew, the ^v route between S and D is hard to read. >>>> Figure 4 is better, but might also be better aligned. >>>> Figure 7 has skew and some other issues... like this line of ._- under >>>> "Southbound API" >>>> I checked .html and .txt to be sure it wasn't just the red/green markup. >>>> Figure 18... not sure if there is a problem. >>>> Figure 19, definitely a problem. >>> >>> Hi, I edited the XML slightly, and put it here: >>> https://www.sandelman.ca/tmp/rfc9914-authors-fixed-figures.xml >>> >>> I think it fixes 3,4,19. >>> I fixed some things on figure 7. >>> I don't know if I got 18. >>> >>> -- >>> Michael Richardson <[email protected]> . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting ) >>> Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> -- >>> Pascal > -- auth48archive mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
