Hi Pascal and *Ketan (AD), Thanks for confirming that the additional updates made to Figures 18 and 19 look good.
*Ketan, please review the new updates to Figures 18 (Section 6.4.2) and 19 (Section 6.4.3). Pascal said the tunnels are more isolated and the PDAO messages are written in full, which should solve the NS issues. Please review and let us know if you approve; see <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-lastrfcdiff.html>. While we await a reply from Ketan, we will ask IANA to update their registries to match the edited document. Once those updates have been made and we have reviewed them, we will inform you. —Files (please refresh)— Updated XML file: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914.xml Updated output files: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914.txt https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914.pdf https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914.html Diff files showing all changes made during AUTH48: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-auth48diff.html https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side) Diff files showing only the changes made during the last edit round: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-lastdiff.html https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side) Diff files showing all changes: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-diff.html https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-rfcdiff.html (side by side) Thank you! Karen Moore RFC Production Center > On Apr 1, 2026, at 12:38 PM, Pascal Thubert <[email protected]> wrote: > > All good to publish Karen! Many thanks ! > > A bientôt; > > Pascal > > Le 1 avr. 2026 à 20:13, Karen Moore <[email protected]> a écrit : > > Hi Pascal and Michael, > > We have updated our files to reflect the changes to Figures 18 and 19 that > Pascal provided. Please review the updated files (in particular, the changes > are easy to view at > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-lastrfcdiff.html>), and let us > know if this is agreeable or if any further changes are needed. > > Michael, we have noted your approval of the document on the AUTH48 status > page. > > > —Files (please refresh)— > > Updated XML file: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914.xml > > Updated output files: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914.txt > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914.pdf > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914.html > > Diff files showing all changes made during AUTH48: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-auth48diff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side) > > Diff files showing only the changes made during the last edit round: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-lastdiff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side) > > Diff files showing all changes: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-diff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-rfcdiff.html (side by side) > > Best regards, > > Karen Moore > RFC Production Center > >> On Apr 1, 2026, at 7:09 AM, Michael Richardson <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> >> Michael, we now await your approval of the document. Once your approval is >> received, we will ask IANA to update their registries to match the edited >> document before moving forward with publication. > > Everything looks good to me. > >> Diff files showing only the changes made during the last edit round: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-lastdiff.html >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9914-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side) > > -- > ] Never tell me the odds! | ipv6 mesh networks [ > ] Michael Richardson, Sandelman Software Works | IoT architect [ > ] [email protected] http://www.sandelman.ca/ | ruby on rails > [ > > On Apr 1, 2026, at 12:39 AM, Pascal Thubert <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hello Michael and Karen > > Please consider figures 18 & 19 I proposed below with the tunnels more > isolated and the PDAO messages written in full. I believe that’s what we need > to solve Michael NS issues with those. > > A bientôt; > > Pascal > >>> Le 21 mars 2026 à 10:26, Pascal Thubert <[email protected]> a écrit : >> >> Hello Michael >> >> The skew seems to be coming from tabs in my editor. >> I reviewed your changes and have no issue with them. >> >> I believe that we need to add a P before or above the DAO the figure 18 like >> below: >> >> 18 would become >> >> ------+--------- >> | Internet >> | >> +-----+ >> | | Border Router >> | | (RPL Root) >> +-----+ | P- ^ | >> | | DAO | P-DAO-ACK | >> o o o o | | | >> o o o o Ingress o o o | ^ | Projected . >> o o o o o \\ o o o | | P-DAO | Route . >> o o o o \\ o o o o | ^ | . >> o o o o o Egress o o v | P-DAO v . >> o o LLN o o o | >> o o o o o Loose Source Route Path | >> o o o o v >> >> >> figure 19 looked OK to me but maybe like below it is clearer? >> >> ------+--------- >> | Internet >> | >> +-----+ >> | | Border Router >> | | (RPL Root) >> +-----+ | P- ^ P-DAO-ACK >> | Track | DAO | >> o o o Ingress V | >> o o o o o o X o X Source- >> o o o o o o o X o o X Routed >> o o o o o o X o X Segment >> o o o o o o o o X X >> Egress >> o o o o o | >> Target >> o o LLN o >> o o o o >> all the best; >> >> Pascal >>> Le sam. 21 mars 2026 à 02:50, Michael Richardson <[email protected]> a >>> écrit : >> >> Michael Richardson <[email protected]> wrote: >>> I found though: >> >>> Figure 3 seems askew, the ^v route between S and D is hard to read. >>> Figure 4 is better, but might also be better aligned. >>> Figure 7 has skew and some other issues... like this line of ._- under >>> "Southbound API" >>> I checked .html and .txt to be sure it wasn't just the red/green markup. >>> Figure 18... not sure if there is a problem. >>> Figure 19, definitely a problem. >> >> Hi, I edited the XML slightly, and put it here: >> https://www.sandelman.ca/tmp/rfc9914-authors-fixed-figures.xml >> >> I think it fixes 3,4,19. >> I fixed some things on figure 7. >> I don't know if I got 18. >> >> -- >> Michael Richardson <[email protected]> . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting ) >> Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide >> >> >> >> >> >> >> -- >> Pascal -- auth48archive mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
