This is another in which the original post got by me. 
Please clone out the lower right "truncated" shadow.
The head which is nearly touching the bottom edge, should be given more
space from the edge, if you can.
Otherwise, it's a terrific shot.

Jack
--- Tom C <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

> I almost really really like this.
> 
> The two things I see that bother me a little, granted I wasn't there,
> and 
> vantage point is probably difficult to achieve in a dynamic situation
> are:
> 
> 1. I wish the bottom right truncated shadow was not present.
> 2. I wish there were overall more 'white' space along the bottom
> edge.
> 
> That doesn't ruin it for me as I do like it, but it feels a little 
> unbalanced and the truncated shadow combined with the almost
> truncated head 
> at the bottom center cause a distraction.
> 
> 
> Tom C.
> 
> 
> 
> >From: "Dario Bonazza" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> >Reply-To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List <[email protected]>
> >To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]>
> >Subject: PESO: Tall shadows
> >Date: Tue, 24 Apr 2007 00:29:35 +0200
> >
> >Taken from the S.Marco tower in Venice, looking down at the
> passers-by in
> >S.Marco Square:
> >http://www.dariobonazza.com/misc/misc18e.htm
> >
> >Apart from the obvious increased contrast and BW conversion, the
> picture 
> >has
> >been flipped, rotated and cropped as required.
> >Does it work for you?
> >
> >Dario
> >
> >
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