Maybe it's the impression you were going for, but the entire scene appears to be overly bright. Always must add; at least, on my monitor.
Jack --- "P. J. Alling" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > I think you're mistaking lack of detail from being mostly out of > focus, > with lack of detail from being blown out. > > Jack Davis wrote: > > This is another in which the original post got by me. > > Please clone out the lower right "truncated" shadow. > > The head which is nearly touching the bottom edge, should be given > more > > space from the edge, if you can. > > Otherwise, it's a terrific shot. > > > > Jack > > --- Tom C <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > > > > >> I almost really really like this. > >> > >> The two things I see that bother me a little, granted I wasn't > there, > >> and > >> vantage point is probably difficult to achieve in a dynamic > situation > >> are: > >> > >> 1. I wish the bottom right truncated shadow was not present. > >> 2. I wish there were overall more 'white' space along the bottom > >> edge. > >> > >> That doesn't ruin it for me as I do like it, but it feels a little > > >> unbalanced and the truncated shadow combined with the almost > >> truncated head > >> at the bottom center cause a distraction. > >> > >> > >> Tom C. > >> > >> > >> > >> > >>> From: "Dario Bonazza" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > >>> Reply-To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List <[email protected]> > >>> To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]> > >>> Subject: PESO: Tall shadows > >>> Date: Tue, 24 Apr 2007 00:29:35 +0200 > >>> > >>> Taken from the S.Marco tower in Venice, looking down at the > >>> > >> passers-by in > >> > >>> S.Marco Square: > >>> http://www.dariobonazza.com/misc/misc18e.htm > >>> > >>> Apart from the obvious increased contrast and BW conversion, the > >>> > >> picture > >> > >>> has > >>> been flipped, rotated and cropped as required. > >>> Does it work for you? > >>> > >>> Dario > >>> > >>> > >>> -- > >>> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > >>> [email protected] > >>> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > >>> > >> > >> -- > >> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > >> [email protected] > >> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > >> > >> > > > > > > __________________________________________________ > > Do You Yahoo!? > > Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam protection around > > http://mail.yahoo.com > > > > > > > -- > Entropy Seminar: The results of a five yeer studee ntu the sekend lw > uf thurmodynamiks aand itz inevibl fxt hon shewb rt nslpn raq liot. > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam protection around http://mail.yahoo.com -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
