Sorry, this was overlooked. Things are now pushed to master.

On Sat, Aug 10, 2024 at 05:29:57PM +0000, Helge Kreutzmann wrote:
> -Users' primary groups can also be overridden
> +The users' primary group can also be overridden

I now says "The user's". Singular is fine here.

> -defined as \fBEXTRA_GROUPS\fP in the configuration file
> +defined as \fBEXTRA_GROUPS\fP

Taken!

> -The files referenced by \fBUID_POOL\fP and \fBGID_POOL\fP do also work.
> +The files referenced by \fBUID_POOL\fP and \fBGID_POOL\fP are also honored.

Taken!

> -Add new user to extra groups defined in the configuration files'
> +Add new users to extra groups defined in the configuration files'

Not taken, the operation just applies to the single user that is being
created with this call.

> -Valid Modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP.
> +Valid modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP.

Taken!

> -Valid Modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP,
> +Valid modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP,

Taken!

> -Valid Modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP,
> +Valid modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP,

Taken!

> -Valid Modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP.
> +Valid modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP.

Taken!

> -Valid Mode: \fBadduser\fP.
> +Valid mode: \fBadduser\fP.

Taken!

There is no match for "Valid Mode" outside po and pot files left.

> -in the range that the uid is chosen from
> +in the range that the numeric identity is chosen from

Not taken, uid is a technical term.

> -Valid Modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP,
> +Valid modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP,

Taken!

> -It will be removed
> -during the release cycle of the Debian release after \fIbookworm\fP.
> +They will be removed
> +during the release cycle of the Debian release after bookworm.

Taken! It now says "Debian 13"

> -to \fIGID\fP.
> -Valid Modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP,
> +to \fIID\fP.
> +Valid modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP,
>  \fBaddgroup\fP, \fBaddgroup \-\-system\fP.

I'd like to have it still say "GID", it's a technical term. Otherwise,
taken.

> -Valid Modes: \fBadduser \-\-system\fP,
> +Valid modes: \fBadduser \-\-system\fP,

Taken!

> -Valid Modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP.
> +Valid modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP.

Taken!

> -Valid Modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP.
> +Valid modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP.

Taken!

> -Valid Modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP.
> +Valid modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP.

Taken!

> -Valid Modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP.
> +Valid modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP.

Taken!

> -Valid Modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBaddgroup\fP.
> +Valid modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBaddgroup\fP.

Taken!

> -Valid Modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP.
> +Valid modes: \fBadduser\fP, \fBadduser \-\-system\fP.

Taken!

> -allow usernames to contain lowercase letters and numbers,
> +allow usernames to contain lowercase letters and digits,

Taken!

> -The \fB\-\-system\fP option adds the same functionality as for users,
> -respectively.
> +The \fB\-\-system\fP option adds the same functionality as for users.

Can you give motivation for this change? I think that respectively is
good here.

> -Valid Modes: \fBdeluser\fP, \fBdeluser \-\-system\fP,
> +Valid modes: \fBdeluser\fP, \fBdeluser \-\-system\fP.

Taken!

> -Valid Modes: \fBdeluser\fP, \fBdeluser \-\-system\fP,
> +Valid modes: \fBdeluser\fP, \fBdeluser \-\-system\fP.

Taken!

> -(defaulting to the current working directory).
> -Valid Modes: \fBdeluser\fP, \fBdeluser \-\-system\fP,
> +(Defaults to the current working directory).
> +Valid modes: \fBdeluser\fP, \fBdeluser \-\-system\fP.

Valid modes: Taken.
"Defaults to" is now a full citizen sentence without parens.

> -Valid Mode: \fBdeluser\fP.
> +Valid mode: \fBdeluser\fP.

Taken!

> -Valid Modes: \fBdeluser --group\fP, \fBdelgroup\fP,
> +Valid modes: \fBdeluser --group\fP, \fBdelgroup\fP.

Taken!

> -Valid Modes: \fBdeluser\fP, \fBdeluser \-\-system\fP,
> +Valid modes: \fBdeluser\fP, \fBdeluser \-\-system\fP.

Taken!

> -Valid Modes: \fBdeluser\fP, \fBdeluser \-\-system\fP,
> +Valid modes: \fBdeluser\fP, \fBdeluser \-\-system\fP.

Taken!

> -Valid Modes: \fBdeluser\fP, \fBdeluser \-\-system\fP,
> +Valid modes: \fBdeluser\fP, \fBdeluser \-\-system\fP.

Taken!

> -allow users to create arbitrary accounts.
> +allow users to remove arbitrary accounts.

The text now is more nebulous: low users to obtain privileges they are
not supposed to have.

Greetings
Marc

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