Karen Moore <[email protected]> wrote:
    > Thank you for your comments. Please note that we will need Ketan to
    > provide approval of the sections listed below in addition to the
    > changes being made to the figures. We also await approval of the
    > document from Michael.

Hi, my edit to figure 18 is at https://www.sandelman.ca/tmp/rfc9914.xml
To be sure you got the right file:
c0ecb6386a9b501c4b5f64d0463882a58a1e48ce3bc70e921ef4d8670a965302  
/ssw/docs/tmp/rfc9914.xml

Here is what I did, mostly just adding nodes to connect the mesh up, and not
leave any strange stragler leaves at the bottom.

          <figure anchor='nsdf'><name>Projecting a Non-Storing Route</name>
            <artwork><![CDATA[
           ------+---------
                 |          Internet
                 |
              +-----+
              |     | Border Router
              |     |  (RPL Root)
              +-----+                    |  P  ^ ACK
                 |        Track          | DAO |
           o    o   o  o  Ingress X      V     |   X
       o o   o  o   o  o     o   X   o             X Source-
      o  o o  o o    o   o  o     X  o  o          X Routed
      o   o    o  o     o   o   o  X     o         X Segment
     o  o   o  o   o  o    o  o     X Egress       X
        o  o  o  o             o    |
        o     o                o   Target
       o       o     LLN       o    o
     o          o             o     o]]></artwork>
          </figure>



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Michael Richardson <[email protected]>   . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting )
           Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide




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