-- *Mar*Of course. Here’s a *refined and lightly edited version* of your essay *“The Computer Takeover of our Hormones.”*
I’ve kept *your voice, message, and style completely intact*, but improved *clarity, structure, and flow*—so that it reads smoothly for publication or presentation. I’ve also added gentle section breaks and paragraphing to help the reader follow your ideas more easily. ------------------------------ 🌿 *The Computer Takeover of Our Hormones* *By YM Sarma* ------------------------------ *1. The Severed Connection* Today, our bodies obey only the mind — a mind cut off from nature. The direct connections we once had through smelling, hearing, touching, tasting, and seeing have been poisoned and numbed by the contamination of land, water, and air. We no longer *perceive* nature directly. Our minds have surrendered to computers. The delicate internal communications of our hormones — the very signals that connect us to our own cells and to the living systems of the biosphere — have been taken over by machines. ------------------------------ *2. The Lost Symbiosis* In free and healthy nature, every organism interacts symbiotically with every other. Through smell, touch, sound, sight, and taste, their internal chemical and hormonal signals merge into one great macro-communication, flowing through the troposphere. This grand web of perception, understanding, and emotion once formed a living unity — the macro symbiosis of life. It was the very essence of *Theism*: the divine intelligence functioning through the interdependence of all beings. ------------------------------ *3. The Fall into Mechanism* Technology has derailed nature’s evolution. In the age of belief, there was macro perception — an understanding that each creature lived as a limb of nature. But now, technology has invaded our very core, taking over the vital foundations of life. Before the human brain evolved its cortex, it lived through the *Rhinencephalon* — the “smelling brain.” Through it, humans sensed and perceived in harmony with every other organism, sharing the same emotional vibrations in the air. Technology maimed this ancient faculty, yet we ignore it, trapped within mechanical paradigms and economic dogmas. ------------------------------ *4. The Economic Man* We have ignored ecology and created instead the *economic man* — the machine as human. In truth, our being depends upon the vast invisible world: the unseen frequencies, energies, and fields that form the majority of reality. Our thoughts, emotions, and perceptions have no physical shape, yet we live because of this formless, abstract nature. By disconnecting from the 99.9965% of invisible but real existence, we shackled ourselves to the visible fraction — to technology — and lost the freedom of living *in* and *as* nature. We call this destruction “economic activity,” but in truth, it is the mechanization of our hormones and our minds. Economics has become the science of dismantling life — the systematized lunacy of destroying the very ecology that sustains us. ------------------------------ *5. Theism and the Air* Theism is not dogma. It is the living component of the troposphere — the vital symbiosis that transforms the biosphere into one vast organism. Theism is *Geography*, a part of *Climatology*. But economic pollution has stripped this Theistic element from the air. We no longer smell, hear, or perceive. Our hormonal system, once guided by nature’s intelligence, has been maimed. The result is catastrophic: we live not in harmony, but in economics — a lifeless mechanism that has replaced the organic unity of existence. ------------------------------ *6. The Way Forward* The cure lies in dismantling the *economic man* and returning to the *ecological being*. Universities must lead this transformation. The most urgent task before every seat of learning is to allow students to reconnect directly with nature — to experience life not through machines, but through their senses, emotions, and symbiotic intelligence. Every university should create a *Free Nature Park* — untouched by technology, unaltered by human interference — where students can observe, smell, hear, and understand nature as living limbs of a single body. ------------------------------ *7. Conclusion* We are not separate from the Earth; we *are* the Earth thinking and feeling itself. To heal ourselves, we must restore the lost dialogue between our hormones and the wind, between our minds and the living air. Only then will the macro perception — the divine communication of life — begin to flow again. ------------------------------ ✅ *Edited version summary:* This version preserves your *philosophical, poetic tone* while giving it a *clearer shape*, suitable for inclusion in an anthology, environmental philosophy publication, or a lecture transcript. Would you like me to *format it for journal publication* (with abstract, keywords, and author bio), or *adapt it into a short book chapter or manifesto* style next? -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Thatha_Patty" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to [email protected]. To view this discussion visit https://groups.google.com/d/msgid/thatha_patty/CACDCHCJja29A1mAf2qRpa4quw3FFn3XBmZv1UOXaqiQksXxBig%40mail.gmail.com.
