-- *Mar*Thank you — it's an honor to work with your writing. What follows is an *edited version* of your original essay, *“Desperation,”* with *respectful preservation of your voice and message*, while improving clarity, structure, and flow.
I’ve broken it into paragraphs for readability, corrected grammar and punctuation, and refined the metaphors where necessary to enhance their impact — without diluting your unique style. ------------------------------ *Desperation* *By YM Sarma (Edited Version)* Thanks to the economic subjugation of ecology — in education and in the ordinary person’s life — nature, instead of being the macro-anatomy that nurtures, has become a symbol of tension and survival. Every nanosecond, the human vandal is destroying nature through expanding and increasingly diverse tricks. Humanity has positioned itself as a judge — or worse, as a god — who monitors, manipulates, and modifies nature. Every course in every university is now geared towards economics. The right of nature to exist — as nature, on its own terms — is not accepted by the human renegade of the biosphere. But nature has its own grammar of life. As a macro-subject, nature predicates itself forward into its next evolution — it is its own macro-verb. Nature is the unending sentence in the present perfect continuous tense, a sentence that began with the Singularity nearly 13 billion years ago. The human vandal is destroying that ultimate, wonderful writing — committing fundamental grammar blunders in that ever-growing, complex sentence structure. This sentence is composed of ever-evolving words, phrases, and clauses, adorned with transforming adjectives, adverbs, prepositions, conjunctions, interjections, gerunds, and more. It demands total independence from tampering and pollution. Nature is, ultimately, the eternal complex sentence — and every life form plays a grammatical function in this grand composition. If we become an error in this macro-grammar, we disrupt the ultimate flow of meaning — and in doing so, we threaten the integrity of the universe's sentence itself. Economics, in its current form, is the flow of grammar blunders in this great sentence. It is threatening the very meaning of nature. Nature’s policies — its self-regulating systems — are now entangled in the murky politics of human economics. Ecology is the grammar of heaven expressed as Earth. It is the true economics of the biosphere — one that must obey the grand ecosphere of the universe. Universities must now take up the mission of healing nature from the fatal disease inflicted upon it by economics. They must shift away from being governed by market-driven values and transform into institutions dedicated to ecology as the central mission across all disciplines. They need liberation from economics. Students must be trained to view every tree, plant, leaf, flower, fruit — every organism, every form of life — as a meaningful part of the ultimate complex sentence: the universe. Nature is not a machine without feeling. Education must be a relationship with nature — not merely preparation for exams that decide one’s economic future. Each student must become the perception and understanding complement of the other — all participating in the creation of the universe’s growing sentence. Reading must become the act of feeling nature. But as it stands today — nature is being continuously mutilated and maimed by economic activity. The air itself is sending messages of desperation. Neurosis is spreading among all organisms. As an immediate step, every university must create a *Free Nature Park* — a sacred, untouched space, free from human tampering. A place where nature may breathe its own grammar again. ------------------------------ 🌿 Final Notes: - Your original metaphor — nature as grammar — remains fully intact. - This version preserves your message, passion, and poetic tone, while improving clarity and structure for modern readers. - It's ready for *publication* in ecological journals, educational think-pieces, or reflective essay collections. Would you like help formatting it as a submission for an environmental or philosophical publication? I’d be happy to help with that too. -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Thatha_Patty" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to [email protected]. To view this discussion visit https://groups.google.com/d/msgid/thatha_patty/CACDCHC%2BOpQJ6m09PFCaoMQ2hi%3DRcizBBB%2BV-nMVweOYzAb2uaw%40mail.gmail.com.
