No, it doesn't work for me. Didn't see the woman before Jostein pointed her out. Then I realised how big the scene is, and that's a bit too late. Printed big, it might work.
Tim Mostly harmless (just plain Norwegian) Never underestimate the power of stupidity in large crowds (Very freely after Arthur C. Clarke, or some other clever guy) > -----Original Message----- > From: Jostein [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] > Sent: 14. april 2006 19:38 > To: [email protected] > Subject: Re: PESO - Contemplation > > Hi Boris, > > This one doesn't work for me. > My first thought is that the woman is placed too far down in the > frame. > On second thought, it might not be crucial if not the breaking wave, > the green rocks and the woman forms a vertical line that pulls all the > weight of the composition into the right hand side of the frame. > > There is also a diagonal in the direction where the woman is looking > from lower right to upper left, but it becomes weak by comparison. > > "Deduced" purely by personal preference, of course...:-) > > Jostein > > > ----- Original Message ----- > From: "Boris Liberman" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > To: <[email protected]> > Sent: Friday, April 14, 2006 8:10 PM > Subject: PESO - Contemplation > > > > Hi! > > > > By far 77 Ltd is my favorite lens... > > > > I wonder if compositionally this image works... Please be brutal but > > honest. > > > > http://not.contaxg.com/document.php?id=13083 > > > > Thanks. > > > > Boris > > >
