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Boris,

Seeing as I was about the only one here that liked this pic, I'll just
say again what a good shot it is. I think the composition is about
perfect for the scene, and the relative size of the girl is absolutely
fine. The overall feeling is one of 'the insignificance of man against
nature' and that is illustrated well here. I had no trouble spotting the
person in the frame, even in a low-res web version. I also think that,
printed nice and large, this pic would be a lovely one to hang on the
wall, but in no  way does it detract by being smaller as a web image.

The only thing I can think of that might improve the shot would be to
expose the scene with a better pattern of breaking waves. This may or
may not have been possible, although the small section of breaker you
have captured looks like it was just about to expand, without getting
too close to the rocks. Maybe even breaking onto the rocks, with another
starting behind - I don't know, but just looking at patterns in the
water to find any way to make it even more interesting than it actually is.

I watched for quite some time a similar scene with my Leica CL and 40mm
Summicron with FP4 before I decided this was exactly the effect I wanted:

<http://www.cottysnaps.com/snaps/landscapes/images/pic11.html>

I was about 200 feet up and the beach was isolated, so no hope of
someone in the sand at lower right to give some scale, but I knew that,
so went with just nature creating patterns.

On a different day with more wind, you'd get lots of frothy water
crashing about, but then having a girl there might not work at all. The
pic you presented is a fine study of nature and the place we have as
human beings within it. Don't be disheartened by a few voices telling
you how 'it would work better if printed bigger' - that it may do, but
it works just as well for me as it is. Remember - make pictures for
yourself. If you are happy, then what else matters? One other person
likes it and that's a bonus :-)



Cheers,
  Cotty


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