I wonder if compositionally this image works...
Not for me, Boris.
You've got some interesting elements, but the composition is weak.
Obviously, the rocks are the main feature here, right. The woman, as
captured, is actually a detriment - she's so small as to make you
concentrate on her trying to figure it out.
The water 'above' the rocks doesn't add anything & in fact detracts as my
eye roams up there looking for added features - which aren't there.
A suggestion is to crop horizontally, just above the rocks & vertically, to
the right of the rocks in the LLH corner - helps make the woman a little
more prominent.
Kenneth Waller
----- Original Message -----
From: "Boris Liberman" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Subject: PESO - Contemplation
Hi!
By far 77 Ltd is my favorite lens...
I wonder if compositionally this image works... Please be brutal but
honest.
http://not.contaxg.com/document.php?id=13083
Thanks.
Boris
