Steve:
To my eye the exposure is perfect... but I'd have liked to see her chin.
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Jim Hemenway
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Steve Knobbe wrote:
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> http://pug.komkon.org/01may/sister.html
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> This was my first portrait attempt, and I'd like to know what I could
> have done differently to produce "better" results. For instance, does
> the shallow DOF work, or should I have stopped down to include the rest
> of the hair? And what about the shadows on the face...does this detract
> from the image? I'm open to comments, critiques and criticisms, positive
> and negative, sugar-coated and harsh, as long as they are ultimately
> helpful in teaching me better technique, etc.
>
> Thanks in advance.
>
> Steve
> Rolla, MO
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