showuon commented on code in PR #16491:
URL: https://github.com/apache/kafka/pull/16491#discussion_r1664105707


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docs/ops.html:
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@@ -3946,6 +3946,7 @@ <h3>Enter Migration Mode on the Brokers</h3>
   </p>
 
   <ul>
+    <li><a href="#brokerconfigs_broker.id">broker.id</a>: In zk mode, if 
<code>broker.id.generation.enable</code> is enabled (default is enabled), 
during migration, if <code>broker.id</code> is not set, the migration will fail 
because <code>node.id</code> will be -1. Both <code>broker.id</code> and 
<code>node.id</code> must be non-negative integers.</li>

Review Comment:
   1. `In zk mode`: The section is all saying "zk mode" broker, no need to 
mention it again.
   2. `if broker.id.generatio ...., if ....` : too many `if`. 
   3. `the migration will fail because <code>node.id</code> will be -1` : we 
don't need to say this. Check the whole section again, we didn't say, `The 
controller.listener.name should also be added to listener.security.property.map 
because it will cause xxx error....`. Just tell users what to do in what 
condition.



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