Mike Kolesnik has posted comments on this change.

Change subject: engine: Internal VmNic Information (WIP)
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Patch Set 2: (13 inline comments)

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File backend/manager/dbscripts/create_tables.sql
Line 899:    id UUID NOT NULL,
Line 900:    interface_name VARCHAR(50),
Line 901:    ipv4_addresses text,
Line 902:    ipv6_addresses text,
Line 903:    CONSTRAINT PK_vm_interface_dynamic PRIMARY KEY(id)
There should also be a FK constraint from this table to the vm_interfaces table
Line 904: ) WITH OIDS;
Line 905: 
Line 906: 
Line 907: -- 
----------------------------------------------------------------------


Line 901:    ipv4_addresses text,
Line 902:    ipv6_addresses text,
Line 903:    CONSTRAINT PK_vm_interface_dynamic PRIMARY KEY(id)
Line 904: ) WITH OIDS;
Line 905: 
You should put this in an upgrade file, this file is only used when installing 
a new instance of the system, not upgrading an existing one.
Line 906: 
Line 907: -- 
----------------------------------------------------------------------
Line 908: --           vm_interface_statistics table
Line 909: -- 
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File backend/manager/dbscripts/network_sp.sql
Line 562: 
Line 563: 
Line 564: ----------------------------------------------------------------
Line 565: -- [vm_interface_dynamic] Table
Line 566: --
You're missing an "insert" STP
Line 567: 
Line 568: 
Line 569: Create or replace FUNCTION 
GetVmInterfaceDynamicByVmInterfaceDynamicId(v_id UUID)
Line 570: RETURNS SETOF vm_interface_dynamic


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File 
backend/manager/modules/common/src/main/java/org/ovirt/engine/core/common/businessentities/VmInterfaceDynamic.java
Line 1: package org.ovirt.engine.core.common.businessentities;
Line 2: 
Line 3: import org.ovirt.engine.core.compat.Guid;
Line 4: 
Line 5: public class VmInterfaceDynamic extends IVdcQueryable implements 
BusinessEntity<Guid>{
Why do you extend IVdcQueryable ?
Line 6: 
Line 7:     /**
Line 8:      * The VmInterfaceDynamic's ID uniquely identifies a 
VmInterfaceDynamic in the system.
Line 9:      */


Line 9:      */
Line 10:     private Guid id;
Line 11: 
Line 12:     /**
Line 13:      * The internal nic's name
I would specify that it is how the guest sees it.
Line 14:      */
Line 15:     String interfaceName;
Line 16: 
Line 17:     /**


Line 16: 
Line 17:     /**
Line 18:      * The vNic's IPv4 addresses
Line 19:      */
Line 20:     String ipv4Addresses;
Why String and not List<org.ovirt.engine.core.utils.IPAddress> (or some other 
class to represent the IP)?
Line 21: 
Line 22:     /**
Line 23:      * The vNic's IPv6 addresses
Line 24:      */


Line 21: 
Line 22:     /**
Line 23:      * The vNic's IPv6 addresses
Line 24:      */
Line 25:     String ipv6Addresses;
Same question..
Line 26: 
Line 27:     public Guid getId() {
Line 28:         return id;
Line 29:     }


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File 
backend/manager/modules/dal/src/main/java/org/ovirt/engine/core/dal/dbbroker/DbFacade.java
Line 879:      * Returns the singleton instance of {@link 
VmInterfaceDynamicDao}.
Line 880:      *
Line 881:      * @return the dao
Line 882:      */
Line 883:     public VmInterfaceDynamicDao getVmInterfaceDynamic() {
Should be called getVmInterfaceDynamicDao
Line 884:         return getDao(VmInterfaceDynamicDao.class);
Line 885:     }


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File 
backend/manager/modules/dal/src/main/java/org/ovirt/engine/core/dao/VmInterfaceDynamicDaoDbFacadeImpl.java
Line 14: {
Line 15: 
Line 16:     public VmInterfaceDynamicDaoDbFacadeImpl() {
Line 17:         super("VmInterfaceDynamic");
Line 18:         setProcedureNameForGetAll("GetAllFromVmInterfaceDynamic");
I didn't see that you added this method
Line 19:     }
Line 20: 
Line 21:     @Override
Line 22:     protected MapSqlParameterSource 
createFullParametersMapper(VmInterfaceDynamic entity) {


Line 20: 
Line 21:     @Override
Line 22:     protected MapSqlParameterSource 
createFullParametersMapper(VmInterfaceDynamic entity) {
Line 23:         return getCustomMapSqlParameterSource()
Line 24:         .addValue("id", entity.getId())
Please indent properly
Line 25:         .addValue("interface_name", entity.getInterfaceName())
Line 26:         .addValue("ipv4_addresses", entity.getIpv4Addresses())
Line 27:         .addValue("ipv6_addresses", entity.getIpv6Addresses());
Line 28:     }


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File 
backend/manager/modules/dal/src/main/java/org/ovirt/engine/core/dao/VmInterfaceDynamicDao.java
Line 3: import org.ovirt.engine.core.common.businessentities.VmInterfaceDynamic;
Line 4: import org.ovirt.engine.core.compat.Guid;
Line 5: 
Line 6: /**
Line 7:  * <code>VmInterfaceDynamicDAO</code> defines a type for performing 
CRUD operations on instances of
Name does not correspond with class name, I would either use @link or no 
javadoc at all (since it doesnt really say anything meaningful)
Line 8:  * {@link VmInterfaceDynamic}.
Line 9:  */
Line 10: public interface VmInterfaceDynamicDao extends 
GenericDao<VmInterfaceDynamic, Guid>, MassOperationsDao<VmInterfaceDynamic, 
Guid> {


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File 
backend/manager/modules/dal/src/main/java/org/ovirt/engine/core/dao/VmNetworkInterfaceDAODbFacadeImpl.java
Line 49:     @Override
Line 50:     public VmNetworkInterface get(Guid id) {
Line 51:         MapSqlParameterSource parameterSource = 
getCustomMapSqlParameterSource().addValue("id", id);
Line 52:         VmNetworkInterface entity = 
getCallsHandler().executeRead("Getvm_interfaceById", mapper, parameterSource);
Line 53:         
entity.setVmInterfaceDynamic(DbFacade.getInstance().getVmInterfaceDynamic().get(id));
This should be done as part of mapper logic, and the fields added to the 
vm_interface_view, no need to double query.
Line 54:         return entity;
Line 55:     }
Line 56: 
Line 57:     @Override


Line 120:         MapSqlParameterSource parameterSource = 
getCustomMapSqlParameterSource()
Line 121:                 .addValue("id", id);
Line 122: 
Line 123:         getCallsHandler().executeModification("Deletevm_interface", 
parameterSource);
Line 124:         DbFacade.getInstance().getVmInterfaceDynamic().remove(id);
I disagree that this is the right place for it, it's hiding this logic in an 
unrelated place, I think this call needs to be done explicitly where the remove 
is called (as is the case for statistics)
Line 125:     }
Line 126: 
Line 127:     @Override
Line 128:     public List<VmNetworkInterface> getAll() {


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Gerrit-Change-Id: I89ffbbb96826c5dca8e4c9cdcddbe122c3523960
Gerrit-PatchSet: 2
Gerrit-Project: ovirt-engine
Gerrit-Branch: master
Gerrit-Owner: Muli Salem <msa...@redhat.com>
Gerrit-Reviewer: Mike Kolesnik <mkole...@redhat.com>
Gerrit-Reviewer: Moti Asayag <masa...@redhat.com>
Gerrit-Reviewer: Muli Salem <msa...@redhat.com>
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