Package: einstein
Version: 2.0.dfsg.2-5
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

While working on the German translation (cf. next bug) I noticed some
issues with the help file, probably the author was not a native
speaker. I'm neither one, so you might request a review on
debian-l10n-english instead of using my patch.

The following changes apply to res/rules.txt
-The game goal is to open all cards in square of 6x6 cards.  When
+The goal of the game is to open all cards in a square of 6x6 cards.  When

-Every row of square contains cards of one type only.  For example,
+Every row of the square contains cards of one type only.  For example,

-Use logic and open cards with method of exclusion.  If card doesn't
+Use logic and open cards with method of exclusion.  If a card isn't

-opened, cell contains every possible cards.  For example,
+open, the cell contains every possible card.  For example,

-means that this cell may contain every rome digit with exception of
+means that this cell may contain every Roman digit with the exception of

-III (because card with III image is absent).  To open card click on
+III (because card with III image is absent).  To open a card click on

-Use tips to solve this puzzle.  There is two types of tips:
+Use tips to solve this puzzle.  There are two types of tips:

-horizontal and vertical.  Vertical tips located at screen bottom.
+horizontal and vertical.  Vertical tips are located at bottom of the screen.

-means that letter 'B' and '+' sign located in the same column.
+means that letter 'B' and '+' sign are located in the same column.

-Horizontal tips located at the right side of the puzzle square.
+Horizontal tips are located at the right side of the puzzle square.

-There is few type of horizontal tips.  First type of horizontal
+There are a few types of horizontal tips.  First type of horizontal

-tip says that two cards located at neighbour columns, but it is
+tip says that two cards are located at neighbouring columns, but it is

-unknown, which one is at the right side and thich is at the left:
+unknown, which one is at the right side and which one is at the left:

-Second tip type means that one cards is at the left of another.
+Second tip type means that one card is at the left of another.

-It says nothing about distance between that cards.  They may be
+It says nothing about distance between those cards.  They may be

-neighbour columns or at the opposite sides of puzzle field:
+in neighbouring columns or at the opposite sides of the puzzle field:

-two another cards:
+two other cards:

-All three cards must be located in neighbour columns, central
+All three cards must be located in neighbouring columns, the central

-card is always between other two, but it is unknown, which card is located
+card is always between other the other two, but it is unknown, which card is 
located

-You can always see removed tips by pressing 'Switch' button.
+You can always see removed tips by pressing the 'Switch' button.

-- System Information:
Debian Release: 5.0.3
  APT prefers stable
  APT policy: (500, 'stable')

Versions of packages einstein depends on:
ii  libc6                  2.7-18            GNU C Library: Shared libraries
ii  libfreetype6           2.3.7-2+lenny1    FreeType 2 font engine, shared lib
ii  libgcc1                1:4.3.2-1.1       GCC support library
ii  libsdl-mixer1.2        1.2.8-4           mixer library for Simple DirectMed
ii  libsdl-ttf2.0-0        2.0.9-1           ttf library for Simple DirectMedia
ii  libsdl1.2debian        1.2.13-2          Simple DirectMedia Layer
ii  libstdc++6             4.3.2-1.1         The GNU Standard C++ Library v3
ii  zlib1g                 1:1.2.3.3.dfsg-12 compression library - runtime

einstein recommends no packages.

einstein suggests no packages.

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