Package: zekr-quran-translations-en
Version: N/A
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

Dear Debian maintainer,

On Saturday, October 13, 2007, I notified you of the beginning of a review 
process
concerning debconf templates for zekr-quran-translations-en.

The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates,
and the proposed changes are attached to this bug report.

Please review the suggested changes are suggested, and if you have any
objections, let me know in the next 3 days.

Please try to avoid uploading zekr-quran-translations-en with these changes 
right now.

The second phase of this process will begin on Thursday, November 01, 2007, 
when I will
coordinate updates to translations of debconf templates.

The existing translators will be notified of the changes: they will
receive an updated PO file for their language.

Simultaneously, a general call for new translations will be sent to
the debian-i18n mailing list.

Both these calls for translations will request updates to be sent as
individual bug reports. That will probably trigger a lot of bug
reports against your package, but these should be easier to deal with.

The call for translation updates and new translations will run until
about Thursday, November 22, 2007. Please avoid uploading a package with fixed 
or changed
debconf templates and/or translation updates in the meantime. Of
course, other changes are safe.

Please note that this is an approximative delay, which depends on my
own availability to process this work and is influenced by the fact
that I simultaneously work on many packages.

Around <DAY25>, I will contact you again and will send a final patch
summarizing all the updates (changes to debconf templates,
updates to debconf translations and new debconf translations).

Again, thanks for your attention and cooperation.


-- System Information:
Debian Release: lenny/sid
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable'), (1, 'experimental')
Architecture: i386 (i686)

Kernel: Linux 2.6.22-2-686 (SMP w/1 CPU core)
Locale: LANG=C, LC_CTYPE=C (charmap=ANSI_X3.4-1968)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
--- zekr-quran-translations-en.old/debian/templates     2007-10-12 
08:13:30.592122027 +0200
+++ zekr-quran-translations-en/debian/templates 2007-10-29 07:34:02.590752479 
+0100
@@ -1,42 +1,42 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [EMAIL PROTECTED] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: quran-translations-en/present-Zekr-Quran-Trans-disclaimer
 Type: note
-_Description: NO WARRANTY FOR AUTHENTICITY OF THE QUR'AN TRANSLATIONS!
- Disclaimer: The translations come with this package are publicly
- available on the web. We just collected and debianized them into a
- single package. So, THERE IS NO WARRANTY OF ANY KIND FOR AUTHENTICITY
- AND/OR CORRECTNESS OF THE PROVIDED QUR'AN TRANSLATIONS.
- .
- Besides, According to Islamic theology, perfectly translating the
- Qur'an is impossible. For instance, Abdullah Yusuf Ali, whose
- translation of the Qur'an ranks alongside the translation of
- Marmaduke Pickthall as the most widely-known and used in the world,
- wrote the following passage in the preface to his translation:
+_Description: No authenticity warranty
+ This package provides a collection of translations which are publicly
+ available on the web.
  .
- "Gentle and discerning reader! what I wish to present to you is an
- English Interpretation, side by side with the Arabic Text. The
- English shall be, not a mere substitution of one word for another,
- but the best expression I can give to the fullest meaning which I can
- understand from the Arabic Text."
+ According to Islamic theology, perfectly translating the
+ Quran is impossible. Most of the time, English translations are
+ considered to be 'interpretations', side by side with the Arabic text,
+ attempting to provide the best expression of its meaning.
  .
- For more information see README.txt.
+ For more information, please read the
+ /usr/share/doc/zekr-quran-translations-en/README.txt file.
 
 Template: quran-translations-en/present-Zekr-Quran-Trans-copyright
 Type: note
-_Description: NOT PERMITTED TO DISTRIBUTE FOR COMMERCIAL PURPOSES!
- Please be aware that It is NOT PERMITTED to distribute ANY OF THE
- TRANSLATIONS COME WITH THIS PACKAGE for commercial purposes. They
- only come in the hope that they will be helpful for those wanting to
- learn more about Islam.
+_Description: Commercial redistribution prohibited
+ The contents of this package should not be redistributed for
+ commercial purposes. It is only provided to help readers to learn
+ more about Islam.
 
 Template: quran-translations-en/accepted-Zekr-Quran-Trans
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Do you agree with the terms?
- In order to install this package, you must agree to the terms.
+_Description: Do you agree with the license terms?
+ In order to install this package, please agree to the licensing terms,
+ particularly with the prohibition of commercial distribution.
 
 Template: quran-translations-en/error-Zekr-Quran-Trans
 Type: error
-_Description: Declined terms for the Qur'an translations
- If you do not agree to the terms you cannot install this package.
- .
- The installation of this package will be canceled.
+_Description: Declined Quran translations license terms
+ As you declined this package's license terms, its installation
+ will be aborted.
--- zekr-quran-translations-en.old/debian/control       2007-10-12 
08:13:30.592122027 +0200
+++ zekr-quran-translations-en/debian/control   2007-10-29 07:34:05.090624709 
+0100
@@ -4,25 +4,24 @@
 Maintainer: Mohammad Derakhshani <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
 Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 5), cdbs, po-debconf, unzip
 Standards-Version: 3.7.2
+Homepage: http://www.siahe.com/zekr/resources.html
 
 Package: zekr-quran-translations-en
 Architecture: all
 Pre-Depends: debconf (>= 0.5) | debconf-2.0
 Depends: zekr, ${misc:Depends}, ${shlibs:Depends}
 Recommends: ttf-freefont
-Description: Zekr Quran English Translations
- These translations can be used with Zekr, Quranic software.
- This package contains the following Quran translations:
+Description: Zekr Quran English translations
+ This package provides translations for use with the free Quranic
+ study tool Zekr.
+ It contains the following Quran translations:
  .
- English - United States English
-  * M. H. Shakir (shakir.zip)
-  * Abdullah Yusufali (yusufali.zip)
-  * Mohammed Marmaduke William Pickthall (pickthall.zip)
+ English - United States English. Authors:
+  - M. H. Shakir (shakir.zip);
+  - Abdullah Yusufali (yusufali.zip);
+  - Mohammed Marmaduke William Pickthall (pickthall.zip).
  .
-  Homepage: http://www.siahe.com/zekr/resources.html
- .
- Disclaimer: There is no warranty of any kind for authenticity and/or
- correctness of the following translations. These are publicly
- available translations on the web. We just collected and debianized
- them into a single package. Use them at your own risk!
- (For more information see README.txt coming with this package.)
+ There is no authenticity or correctness warranty for these
+ translations. For more information please read the provided
+ /usr/share/doc/zekr-quran-translations-en/README.txt file.
+

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