to me the design looks a little bit like hastily cobbled together. the elements are not aligned, there is no contrast and the different font types are fighting each other. there are to many elements, especially for navigation (the apps, the top right menu, device selector and the monitor).

of course also i am not a designer, but we had some lessons in university on this topic, so i tried to quickly stick something together.
http://wstaw.org/m/2011/12/22/calligrahp__.png

this is far from perfect, it could use some more contrast, the fonts should be consistent, and the bottom news area is lifeless (could use some graphics there).

this message is intended to be constructive, please don't feel offended or something.

the other points (content etc) are still valid.

greets, adam


On Thu, 22 Dec 2011 00:21:12 +0100, Jaroslaw Staniek <stan...@kde.org> wrote:

Update:
http://kexi-project.org/pics/ads/calligra/web-page/web-page-mockup9.png

- After intense 'research' with Inge added What is Calligra? link below the logo
- Mocked up the life stream section and the aligned the main area



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