Hi Chris, Kazuho, Nick,

Thank you for your replies. We have marked your final approvals on the AUTH48 
status page (see https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849). Once we receive 
approval from Eric, we will ask IANA to complete their updates.

Thank you!

Madison Church
RFC Production Center

> On Feb 25, 2026, at 12:21 PM, Christopher Wood <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> I approve publication.
> 
> Best,
> Chris 
> 
>> On Feb 24, 2026, at 5:11 PM, Madison Church <[email protected]> 
>> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi Authors,
>> 
>> Eric - Thank you for your reply. We have reverted all [RFC9846] citations 
>> back to [RFC8446] per your response. Aside from the issue filed on GitHub 
>> for this document (https://github.com/ietf-tools/xml2rfc/issues/1308), we 
>> believe there are no outstanding items that require further review. While 
>> this issue is being worked on, we can still note formatting approvals (and 
>> therefore final approvals) for this document. As requested, we will not 
>> proceed with publication until issue #1308 is resolved.
>> 
>> All - Please review the XML file and its TXT, HTML, and PDF outputs, and let 
>> us know if any changes are required or if you approve the RFC for 
>> publication. While this is your approval of the XML and its outputs, we 
>> consider this your final assent that the document is ready for publication. 
>> To request changes or approve your RFC for publication, please reply to this 
>> email. Please use ‘REPLY ALL’, as all the parties CCed on this message need 
>> to see your approval.
>> 
>> Please note that we will only make changes in the XML file from this point 
>> on.
>> 
>> XML file:
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.xml
>> 
>> Output files:
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.txt
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.pdf
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.html
>> 
>> Lastdiff of the text (shows only the format changes):
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-lastdiff.html
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side)
>> 
>> Comprehensive diff file of the text:
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-diff.html
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>> 
>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849
>> 
>> Once all approvals are received, we will proceed with IANA updates.
>> 
>> Thank you!
>> 
>> Madison Church
>> RFC Production Center
>> 
>>> On Feb 21, 2026, at 11:05 PM, Eric Rescorla <[email protected]> wrote:
>>> 
>>> 
>>> On Fri, Feb 20, 2026 at 2:35 PM Madison Church 
>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>> Hello Authors,
>>> 
>>> Now that we have all necessary content approvals, we have converted the 
>>> kramdown-rfc file to RFCXML. We made some additional formatting changes in 
>>> the XML file, including reference updates.
>>> 
>>> We also have additional comments for your review:
>>> 
>>> 1) Upon completing the XML conversion, we came across a bug in the updated 
>>> WHATWG-IPV4 reference, specifically in the TXT output. We have filed an 
>>> issue with the Tools Team; see 
>>> https://github.com/ietf-tools/xml2rfc/issues/1308 for further 
>>> clarification.  
>>> 
>>> This needs to be fixed before publication.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 2) We have updated RFCs 8446 and 8447 to RFC-to-be-9846 and RFC 9847 per 
>>> Sean Turner’s mail from 2 December 2025. With these reference updates, 
>>> please review the updated files and let us know if any updates are needed 
>>> to the current in-text citations for these RFCs.
>>> 
>>> I'm not sure this is advisable. The net impact is that it puts these 
>>> documents behind RFC 9846. I recognize that it's in Auth48, but we're 
>>> working through some issues, so it's probably not going to be like next 
>>> week.
>>> 
>>> -Ekr
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Please review the XML file and its TXT, HTML, and PDF outputs, and let us 
>>> know if any changes are required or if you approve the RFC for publication. 
>>> While this is your approval of the XML and its outputs, we consider this 
>>> your final assent that the document is ready for publication. To request 
>>> changes or approve your RFC for publication, please reply to this email. 
>>> Please use ‘REPLY ALL’, as all the parties CCed on this message need to see 
>>> your approval.
>>> 
>>> Please note that we will only make changes in the XML file from this point 
>>> on.
>>> 
>>> XML file:
>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.xml
>>> 
>>> Output files:
>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.txt
>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.pdf
>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.html
>>> 
>>> Lastdiff of the text (shows only the format changes):
>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-lastdiff.html
>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>> 
>>> Comprehensive diff file of the text:
>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-diff.html
>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>> 
>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849
>>> 
>>> Thank you!
>>> 
>>> Madison Church
>>> RFC Production Center
>>> 
>>>>> On Feb 19, 2026, at 7:30 PM, Kazuho Oku <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> Thank you for all the changes. I approve.
>>>> 
>>>> 2026年2月19日(木) 5:54 Madison Church <[email protected]>:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Hi Authors,
>>>>> 
>>>>> We have noted approvals for Paul, Eric, and Chris on the AUTH48 status 
>>>>> page (see https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849). Once we receive 
>>>>> Kazuho’s approval for the document’s content, we will move forward with 
>>>>> the RFCXML conversion and formatting updates.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>> 
>>>>>> On Feb 18, 2026, at 2:39 PM, Paul Wouters <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> ah thanks,
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Approved
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Paul
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> On Wed, Feb 18, 2026 at 1:48 PM Sandy Ginoza 
>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>> Hi Paul,
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> This is also my mistake - apologies for the confusion!
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Please review the diffs in this file and let us know if you approve:
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849v4fixed-rfcdiff.html
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>> Sandy Ginoza
>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> On Feb 18, 2026, at 10:29 AM, Paul Wouters <[email protected]> 
>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> On Tue, Feb 17, 2026 at 6:38 PM Sandy Ginoza 
>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>> Hi Eric, Paul*,
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Thank you for your review and the updated .md file.  The current files 
>>>>>>> are available here:
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.md
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.txt
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.pdf
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.html
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Diffs of the most recent updates:
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-lastdiff.html
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-lastrfcdiff.html (side by 
>>>>>>> side)
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> AUTH48 diffs:
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by 
>>>>>>> side)
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Comprehensive diffs:
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-diff.html
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> * Paul, please review the diffs of the most recent updates and let us 
>>>>>>> know if you approve.
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-lastdiff.html
>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-lastrfcdiff.html (side by 
>>>>>>> side)
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> I am a bit confused here as the diff contains questions from you to us, 
>>>>>>> and I am not sure if I and/or authors are still
>>>>>>> supposed to choose an option. That is, you seem to be asking more than 
>>>>>>> just approval from me?
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Otherwise, the changes looks fine to me.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Paul
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Authors, please let us know if any additional updates are needed or if 
>>>>>>> you approve the RFC for publication.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>>> Sandy Ginoza
>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> On Feb 17, 2026, at 10:56 AM, Eric Rescorla <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Please find an updated markdown file at:
>>>>>>>> https://raw.githubusercontent.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-esni/baf67ab50fb5238eab07d7e3f081aec4495c4742/rfc9849.md
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> On Mon, Feb 16, 2026 at 8:14 AM Christopher Wood 
>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>> I approve publication of the latest document. Thanks for the work, all.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Best,
>>>>>>>> Chris
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> On Feb 11, 2026, at 4:25 PM, Madison Church 
>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Hi Kazuho,
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Thank you for your reply! We have updated our files to match your 
>>>>>>>>> name preference for consistency with other RFCs.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> For the change regarding HpkeKeyConfig, we will wait for additional 
>>>>>>>>> reviews/comments.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.txt
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.pdf
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.html
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Markdown file:
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.md
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-diff.html (comprehensive 
>>>>>>>>> diff)
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48diff.html (diff 
>>>>>>>>> showing AUTH48 changes)
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48rfcdiff.html (side 
>>>>>>>>> by side)
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Markdown diffs:
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-diff.html
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> On Feb 5, 2026, at 12:39 AM, Kazuho Oku <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Hello Madison, authors,
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Thank you very much for pushing the draft forward.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> I have read through the updated markdown and I would like to request 
>>>>>>>>>> two nits.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> I've separately filed a PR
>>>>>>>>>> (https://github.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-esni/pull/672), but the nits
>>>>>>>>>> are:
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> # Section 5 and Section 6.1: Incorrect references to properties of 
>>>>>>>>>> HpkeKeyConfig
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> `cipher_suites`, `kem_id`, `public_key` are members of
>>>>>>>>>> `HpkeKeyConfig`, and therefore it would be correct to refer to them 
>>>>>>>>>> as
>>>>>>>>>> `ECHConfigContents.key_config.~`. However, `key_config` is missing.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> IMO this is editorial, however it is not a grammatical error, and
>>>>>>>>>> therefore would appreciate reviews from other authors.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> # Update my name to use Kanji
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> This would make the representation consistent with other RFCs that I 
>>>>>>>>>> coauthored.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> For the ease of the review, the diff file against the TXT version is 
>>>>>>>>>> attached.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 2026年2月4日(水) 6:32 Madison Church <[email protected]>:
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Eric,
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for the updated markdown file! Updated files are listed 
>>>>>>>>>>> below. We will wait to hear from you once you’ve completed your 
>>>>>>>>>>> top-to-bottom read.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> For details of the AUTH48 process in kramdown-rfc (including the 
>>>>>>>>>>> two-part approval process), see 
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.txt
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.pdf
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.html
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Markdown file:
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.md
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-diff.html (comprehensive 
>>>>>>>>>>> diff)
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-rfcdiff.html (side by 
>>>>>>>>>>> side)
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48diff.html (diff 
>>>>>>>>>>> showing AUTH48 changes)
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48rfcdiff.html (side 
>>>>>>>>>>> by side)
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Markdown diffs:
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> On Feb 3, 2026, at 2:17 PM, Eric Rescorla <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> Here is an updated markdown file with the outstanding PRs. The 
>>>>>>>>>>>> technical ones
>>>>>>>>>>>> were reviewed.
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> https://raw.githubusercontent.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-esni/18715d4e44626db8f3460442e363ede9526277b0/rfc9849.md
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> I still need to do my top-to-bottom read.
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> On Tue, Feb 3, 2026 at 11:55 AM Madison Church 
>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Authors,
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> This is another friendly weekly reminder that we await content 
>>>>>>>>>>>> approvals from Christopher, Kazuho, and Eric before moving along 
>>>>>>>>>>>> with formatting updates for this document.
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Jan 27, 2026, at 2:37 PM, Madison Church 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Authors,
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> This is a friendly weekly reminder that we await content 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> approvals from Christopher, Kazuho, and Eric before moving along 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> with formatting updates for this document.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Jan 17, 2026, at 6:37 PM, Eric Rescorla <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Fri, Jan 16, 2026 at 2:37 PM Madison Church 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi All,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Paul - We have noted your approvals for the two proposed 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> technical changes.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Nick - Thank you for your reply! We have noted your approval for 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the contents of this document on the AUTH48 status page and 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> implemented your requested updates. The diff file was incredibly 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> helpful!
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> We will wait for confirmation to implement the technical changes.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I will implement the technical changes in my copy.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Please review the contents of the document carefully. Contact us 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> with any further updates or with your approval of the document’s 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> contents in its current form. Once we receive approvals from 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Christopher, Kazuho, and Eric, we will move forward with 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> formatting updates.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For details of the AUTH48 process in kramdown-rfc (including the 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> two-part approval process), see 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.txt
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.pdf
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Markdown file:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.md
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-diff.html 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (comprehensive diff)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-rfcdiff.html (side by 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48diff.html (diff 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> showing AUTH48 changes)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48rfcdiff.html 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Markdown diffs:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Jan 14, 2026, at 9:42 AM, Nick Sullivan 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hello RFC Production Center,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I reviewed the currently posted AUTH48 text for RFC-to-be 9849
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (rfc9849.txt on the RFC Editor authors page). Below are a small 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> set of
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> remaining editorial issues.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Two items that are technically non-editorial are already being 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> handled
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> in the TLS WG GitHub repository (issues 656 and 665 / 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> corresponding
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> open PRs). To avoid duplication, I am not requesting those 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> changes
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> here or requesting any expansion of RFC number placeholders (for
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> example RFCYYY1) in this note.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> A) Typos and minor editorial fixes (no intended technical 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> change)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Section 5.1 (Encoding the ClientHelloInner)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> - Replace “structured defined” with “structure defined”.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Section 6.1 (Offering ECH)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> - Capitalization: “Instead, It MUST …” -> “Instead, it MUST …”.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Section 7 (Server Behavior introduction)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> - Consistency: “back-end server” -> “backend server”.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Section 10.8 (Cookies)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> - Insert missing space: “unencrypted.This” -> “unencrypted. 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> This”.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Section 11.3 (ECH Configuration Extension Registry)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> - Fix grammar in the “Recommended” field description and remove
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> duplicated wording (“value with a value of”).
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Proposed patch (unified diff against the currently posted 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> rfc9849.txt;
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> excludes items already covered by issues 656 and 665; no RFC
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> placeholder expansions)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ```
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> --- rfc9849.txt
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> +++ rfc9849.txt
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> @@ -521,7 +521,7 @@
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -        structured defined in Section 5.3 of [RFC9147].  This 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> does not
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> +        structure defined in Section 5.3 of [RFC9147].  This 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> does not
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> @@ -675,7 +675,7 @@
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -            ClientHelloInner.random.  Instead, It MUST 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> generate a fresh
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> +            ClientHelloInner.random.  Instead, it MUST 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> generate a fresh
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> @@ -1129,7 +1129,7 @@
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -        the client-facing server or as the back-end server.  
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Depending on the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> +        the client-facing server or as the backend server.  
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Depending on the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> @@ -1706,7 +1706,7 @@
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -        unencrypted.This means differences in cookies between 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> backend
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> +        unencrypted. This means differences in cookies between 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> backend
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> @@ -2114,13 +2114,12 @@
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -   Recommended:  A "Y" or "N" value indicating if the 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> extension is TLS
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -      WG recommends that the extension be supported.  This 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> column is
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -      assigned a value of "N" unless explicitly requested.  
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Adding a
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -      value with a value of "Y" requires Standards Action 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [RFC8126].
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> +   Recommended:  A "Y" or "N" value indicating if the TLS 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Working Group
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> +      recommends that the extension be supported.  This column 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> is assigned a
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> +      value of "N" unless explicitly requested.  Adding a 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> value of "Y"
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> +      requires Standards Action [RFC8126].
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ```
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> GitHub PR: 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-esni/pull/671/files
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> With these changes, the publication is approved by me.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Nick Sullivan
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Mon, Jan 12, 2026 at 12:28 PM Nick Sullivan
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Madison,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Apologies for the delay, I was intending to do this over the 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> new year but didn't get to it. I'll review by end of week.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Best,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Nick
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Fri, Jan 9, 2026 at 10:31 AM Paul Wouters 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> approved (via email and at the PRs listed)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Paul
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Thu, Jan 8, 2026 at 4:49 PM Madison Church 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Authors, *Paul,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Happy new year!
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> This is a friendly reminder that we have yet to hear back 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> from you regarding the readiness of this document’s contents 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> before moving forward with formatting updates.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> *Paul - As responsible AD for this document, please review 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the changes below and let us know if you approve:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-esni/pull/668
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-esni/pull/667
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status page, see: 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Dec 18, 2025, at 12:46 PM, Madison Church 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Eric,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for the followup! We have updated the AUTH48 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> status page (https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849) and 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> we will wait to hear from you once you complete your final 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> content review.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Dec 18, 2025, at 12:33 PM, Eric Rescorla 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> FWIW I think Paul actually just approved this one change, 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> not the overall RFC.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I have merged this markdown file into the version on 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> GitHub. There are two pending
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> changes that are technically not just editorial, though I 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> think obvious and need Paul's
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> approval:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-esni/pull/668
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-esni/pull/667
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> In parallel, I will also need to give it a final 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> top-to-bottom read, which I hope to do in the next
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> week or so.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Thu, Dec 18, 2025 at 9:42 AM Madison Church 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Paul,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> We have marked your approval on the AUTH48 status page 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (see https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849).
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thanks!
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Dec 18, 2025, at 11:27 AM, Paul Wouters 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Dec 18, 2025, at 11:06, Madison Church 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Authors, *Paul,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> *Paul - As responsible AD, please note that we await 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> your approval of RFC YYY1 as an Informative Reference 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (changed from Normative to Informative).
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> approved
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Paul
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Authors - This is a friendly reminder that we await 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> approvals from each author prior to moving forward with 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> formatting updates.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For details of the AUTH48 process in kramdown-rfc 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (including the two-part approval process), see 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.txt
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.pdf
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Markdown file:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.md
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> refresh):
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-diff.html 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (comprehensive diff)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-rfcdiff.html 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  (diff showing AUTH48 changes)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Markdown diffs:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Dec 11, 2025, at 10:07 AM, Madison Church 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Eric, *Paul,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Eric - Thank you for your reply! We weren’t sure if 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> this was intentional, so thank you for clarifying. We 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> have moved RFC YYY1 to the Informative References 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> section.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> *Paul - As responsible AD, please let us know if you 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> approve RFC YYY1 as an Informative Reference.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Please review the contents of the document carefully. 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Contact us with any further updates or with your 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> approval of the document’s contents in its current 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> form. We will await approvals from each author prior to 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> moving forward with formatting updates.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For details of the AUTH48 process in kramdown-rfc 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (including the two-part approval process), see 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.txt
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.pdf
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Markdown file:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.md
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> refresh):
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-diff.html 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (comprehensive diff)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-rfcdiff.html 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  (diff showing AUTH48 changes)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Markdown diffs:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Dec 5, 2025, at 4:38 PM, Eric Rescorla 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Madison,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I believe that the citation to RFCYYY1 should be 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> informative, not normative. I corrected that in
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> my version but I guess I forgot to flag it. Paul, 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> co-authors, any objections?
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Fri, Dec 5, 2025 at 2:16 PM Madison Church 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Eric,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for the updated markdown file! We have 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> incorporated your edits into the document. Upon 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> further review, we have also updated the term "Shared 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Mode" to follow the same pattern as "Split Mode" 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (uppercase on first use and in titles, lowercase 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> otherwise). Please let us know any objections. 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Additionally, we will update the WHATWG reference per 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> our discussion during formatting. Aside from the 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> updates mentioned, we have no further 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> questions/comments at this time.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Please review the contents of the document carefully. 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Contact us with any further updates or with your 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> approval of the document’s contents in its current 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> form. We will await approvals from each author prior 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> to moving forward with formatting updates.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For details of the AUTH48 process in kramdown-rfc 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (including the two-part approval process), see 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.txt
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.pdf
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Markdown file:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.md
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> refresh):
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-diff.html 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (comprehensive diff)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  (diff showing AUTH48 changes)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Markdown diffs:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Dec 4, 2025, at 7:12 PM, Eric Rescorla 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Here is an updated markdown file with the fixed width 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> adjustments.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://raw.githubusercontent.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-esni/refs/heads/auth48/rfc9849.md
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Wed, Dec 3, 2025 at 9:49 AM Eric Rescorla 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Wed, Dec 3, 2025 at 6:23 AM Madison Church 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Eric,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for your reply! Please see inline.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Dec 2, 2025, at 1:38 PM, Eric Rescorla 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thanks.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Re the questions and comments:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> * I will send a revised file with the fixed width 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> issues fixed
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Noted!
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> * As I understand the WHATWG question, there are two 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> distinct issues (1) whether to reference a commit 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> and (2) whether to reference fragments. I'm OK with 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> referencing a commit like this if that's what you 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> agreed with WHATWG, but I read this text as saying 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> not to reference fragments unless we ensure that the 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> anchor is permanent 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://whatwg.org/working-mode#anchors. Have we 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> done so for this one?
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for clarifying. We are unsure if the 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> current anchor [1] is permanent, so we would 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> recommend not using it and using the more general one 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [2]. However, if any other authors put in a request 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> with WHATWG to make that anchor permanent, please let 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> us know.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [1] https://url.spec.whatwg.org/#concept-ipv4-parser
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [2] https://url.spec.whatwg.org/
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I think we are in agreement, then, thanks.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Tue, Dec 2, 2025 at 6:58 AM Madison Church 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Authors,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> This is a friendly weekly reminder that we await 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> answers to the followup questions/comments below and 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> your review of the document before continuing with 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the publication process. For details of the AUTH48 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> process in kramdown-rfc (including the two-part 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> approval process), see: 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Nov 25, 2025, at 8:34 AM, Madison Church 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Eric,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for your reply! We have updated the 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> document as requested and have two followup items 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> for your review, which can be viewed in the AUTH48 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> thread below or in the updated markdown file marked 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> with "rfced".
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Nov 20, 2025, at 10:33 PM, Eric Rescorla 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Update: I fixed my affiliation.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Thu, Nov 20, 2025 at 8:23 PM Eric Rescorla 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you. I am editing this in GitHub. I merged 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> in your proposed changes except
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> for those I think are inadvisable, which I 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> reverted. I answered your questions inline.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> You can find the latest markdown file here (also 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> attached):
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://raw.githubusercontent.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-esni/refs/heads/auth48/rfc9849.md
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Fri, Nov 14, 2025 at 10:53 AM 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Authors,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> please resolve (as necessary) the following 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> questions, which are also in the source file.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] References
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> a) Regarding [WHATWG-IPV4], this reference's date 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> is May 2021.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The URL provided resolves to a page with "Last 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Updated 12 May 2025".
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Note that WHATWG provides "commit snapshots" of 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> their living standards and
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> there are several commit snapshots from May 2021 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> with the latest being from 20
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> May 2021. For example: 20 May 2021
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (https://url.spec.whatwg.org/commit-snapshots/1b8b8c55eb4bed9f139c9a439fb1c1bf5566b619/#concept-ipv4-parser)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> We recommend updating this reference to the most 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> current version of the WHATWG
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Living Standard, replacing the URL with the more 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> general URL to the standard
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (https://url.spec.whatwg.org/), and adding a 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "commit snapshot" URL to the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> reference.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [WHATWG-IPV4]
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> WHATWG, "URL - IPv4 Parser", WHATWG Living 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Standard, May
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 2021, 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://url.spec.whatwg.org/#concept-ipv4-parser>.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> EKR: Per MT, WHATWG has asked us not to do that. 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> We should leave
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> this as-is and change the date to December 2025.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 1) For context, we reached out to WHATWG in 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> September about a format for references to their 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> standards (see: 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/whatwg/meta/issues/363). The 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> proposed update below for this reference reflects 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the approved format. It would be helpful for the 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RPC to know what WHATWG has asked authors to not 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> do so that we can reach out for clarification and 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> update our recommended citation if necessary. With 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> this in mind, let us know if any updates need to 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> be made.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [WHATWG-IPV4]
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> WHATWG, "URL - IPv4 Parser", WHATWG Living 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Standard,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <https://url.spec.whatwg.org/#concept-ipv4-parser>.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Commit snapshot:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://url.spec.whatwg.org/commit-snapshots/1b8b8c55eb4bed9f139c9a439fb1c1bf5566b619/#concept-ipv4-parser
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Regarding the date, we don't recommend using a 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> future date for a reference as it doesn't reflect 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the date for a currently published work (unless 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> there is an anticipated update to the WHATWG 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> specification in December 2025).
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> d) FYI, RFCYYY1 (draft-ietf-tls-svcb-ech) will be 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> updated during the XML stage.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] We note that the following terms 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> use fixed-width font
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> inconsistently. Please review these terms and let 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> us know how we should update
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> or if there are any specific patterns that should 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> be followed (e.g.,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> fixed-width font used for field names, variants, 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> etc.).
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> accept_confirmation
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> cipher_suite
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ClientHello
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ClientHelloInner
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ClientHelloOuter
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ClientHelloOuterAAD
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> config_id
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ECHClientHello
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ECHConfig
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ECHConfig.contents.public_name
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ECHConfigContents
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ECHConfigList
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> EncodedClientHelloInner
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> inner
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> maximum_name_length
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> outer
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> payload
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> public_key
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ServerHello.random
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> zeros
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> —>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> EKR: Thanks. Fixed width should be used for field 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> names and other PDUs.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I notice that some of these are regular words 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (zeros) so you have to determine from context 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> whether it's referring to some protocol element 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> or just to the concept "carries an encrypted 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> payload" versus "the payload field". Do you want 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> to take a cut at changing as many of these as 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> make sense and then I can review, or would you 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> prefer I make the changes?
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> One question is what to do in definition lists. 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> My sense is that the list heds should be 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> non-fixed-width but maybe you have a convention.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 2) Thank you for offering to make changes. Please 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> feel free to attach an updated markdown file 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> containing the changes for terms using fixed-width 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> font.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For definition lists, we typically leave this up 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> to the authors to determine how they would like 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the terms to appear for consistency. For an 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> example of terms in a definition list using a 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> fixed-width font, see: 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc9623.html#section-5.1.1.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.txt
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.pdf
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.xml
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.md
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (please refresh):
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  (side by side)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Markdown diffs:
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48diff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48rfcdiff.html
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> see: https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> We will await approvals from each author prior to 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> moving forward with formatting updates. For 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> details of the AUTH48 process in kramdown-rfc 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (including the two-part approval process), see: 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> --
>>>>>>>>>> Kazuho Oku
>>>>>>>>>> <rfc9849.txt.kazuho.diff>
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> --
>>>> Kazuho Oku

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