Approved.

-Ekr


On Wed, Feb 18, 2026 at 9:48 AM Sandy Ginoza <[email protected]>
wrote:

> Hi again,
>
> I meant to also mention that we updated the files to restore the tildes
> and remove the [rfced] questions that have been resolved.  The up-to-date
> files are here:
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.md
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.txt
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.pdf
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.html
>
> This file highlights the diffs showing only the updates described above:
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-lastrfcdiff.html (side by
> side)
>
> Thanks,
> Sandy Ginoza
> RFC Production Center
>
>
>
> > On Feb 18, 2026, at 9:42 AM, Sandy Ginoza <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Eric,
> >
> > 1. Thanks for noting this!  We didn’t intend to touch the fences.  After
> some experimentation, it turns out that it’s the result of copying and
> pasting (trims a tilde) versus downloading the file.  We’ll be sure to
> download and check for these characters moving forward.
> >
> > 2. You are correct — my mistake. I should have asked that you let us
> know whether the content is stable and ready to be converted to XML.  We
> will ask for a final approval once we convert the markdown to XML and all
> remaining queries are resolved.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Sandy Ginoza
> > RFC Production Center
> >
> >
> >
> >> On Feb 17, 2026, at 3:50 PM, Eric Rescorla <[email protected]> wrote:
> >>
> >> HI Sandy,
> >>
> >> 1. Can you explain the changes to the markdown fences,
> https://github.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-esni/pull/679. Is there some
> significance here?
> >> 2. This says "approve the RFC for publication", but as I understood it
> we will see another version once you do the XML conversion, and need to
> sign off on that. Is that correct?
> >>
> >> -Ekr
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >> On Tue, Feb 17, 2026 at 3:38 PM Sandy Ginoza <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >> Hi Eric, Paul*,
> >>
> >> Thank you for your review and the updated .md file.  The current files
> are available here:
> >>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.md
> >>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.txt
> >>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.pdf
> >>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.html
> >>
> >> Diffs of the most recent updates:
> >>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-lastdiff.html
> >>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-lastrfcdiff.html (side by
> side)
> >>
> >> AUTH48 diffs:
> >>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48diff.html
> >>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48rfcdiff.html (side
> by side)
> >>
> >> Comprehensive diffs:
> >>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-diff.html
> >>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-rfcdiff.html (side by
> side)
> >>
> >>
> >> * Paul, please review the diffs of the most recent updates and let us
> know if you approve.
> >>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-lastdiff.html
> >>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-lastrfcdiff.html (side by
> side)
> >>
> >>
> >> Authors, please let us know if any additional updates are needed or if
> you approve the RFC for publication.
> >>
> >> Thank you,
> >> Sandy Ginoza
> >> RFC Production Center
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >>> On Feb 17, 2026, at 10:56 AM, Eric Rescorla <[email protected]> wrote:
> >>>
> >>> Please find an updated markdown file at:
> >>>
> https://raw.githubusercontent.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-esni/baf67ab50fb5238eab07d7e3f081aec4495c4742/rfc9849.md
> >>>
> >>> On Mon, Feb 16, 2026 at 8:14 AM Christopher Wood <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> >>> I approve publication of the latest document. Thanks for the work, all.
> >>>
> >>> Best,
> >>> Chris
> >>>
> >>>> On Feb 11, 2026, at 4:25 PM, Madison Church <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>
> >>>> Hi Kazuho,
> >>>>
> >>>> Thank you for your reply! We have updated our files to match your
> name preference for consistency with other RFCs.
> >>>>
> >>>> For the change regarding HpkeKeyConfig, we will wait for additional
> reviews/comments.
> >>>>
> >>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.txt
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.pdf
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.html
> >>>>
> >>>> Markdown file:
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.md
> >>>>
> >>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-diff.html (comprehensive
> diff)
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-rfcdiff.html (side by
> side)
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48diff.html (diff
> showing AUTH48 changes)
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48rfcdiff.html (side
> by side)
> >>>>
> >>>> Markdown diffs:
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-diff.html
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-rfcdiff.html
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48diff.html
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48rfcdiff.html
> >>>>
> >>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849
> >>>>
> >>>> Thank you!
> >>>>
> >>>> Madison Church
> >>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>
> >>>>> On Feb 5, 2026, at 12:39 AM, Kazuho Oku <[email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Hello Madison, authors,
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Thank you very much for pushing the draft forward.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> I have read through the updated markdown and I would like to request
> two nits.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> I've separately filed a PR
> >>>>> (https://github.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-esni/pull/672), but the
> nits
> >>>>> are:
> >>>>>
> >>>>> # Section 5 and Section 6.1: Incorrect references to properties of
> HpkeKeyConfig
> >>>>>
> >>>>> `cipher_suites`, `kem_id`, `public_key` are members of
> >>>>> `HpkeKeyConfig`, and therefore it would be correct to refer to them
> as
> >>>>> `ECHConfigContents.key_config.~`. However, `key_config` is missing.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> IMO this is editorial, however it is not a grammatical error, and
> >>>>> therefore would appreciate reviews from other authors.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> # Update my name to use Kanji
> >>>>>
> >>>>> This would make the representation consistent with other RFCs that I
> coauthored.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> For the ease of the review, the diff file against the TXT version is
> attached.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> 2026年2月4日(水) 6:32 Madison Church <[email protected]>:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Hi Eric,
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Thank you for the updated markdown file! Updated files are listed
> below. We will wait to hear from you once you’ve completed your
> top-to-bottom read.
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> For details of the AUTH48 process in kramdown-rfc (including the
> two-part approval process), see
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.txt
> >>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.pdf
> >>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.html
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Markdown file:
> >>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.md
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-diff.html
> (comprehensive diff)
> >>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-rfcdiff.html (side by
> side)
> >>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48diff.html (diff
> showing AUTH48 changes)
> >>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48rfcdiff.html
> (side by side)
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Markdown diffs:
> >>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-diff.html
> >>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-rfcdiff.html
> >>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48diff.html
> >>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48rfcdiff.html
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> >>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Thank you!
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Madison Church
> >>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>> On Feb 3, 2026, at 2:17 PM, Eric Rescorla <[email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Here is an updated markdown file with the outstanding PRs. The
> technical ones
> >>>>>>> were reviewed.
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> https://raw.githubusercontent.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-esni/18715d4e44626db8f3460442e363ede9526277b0/rfc9849.md
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> I still need to do my top-to-bottom read.
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> -Ekr
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> On Tue, Feb 3, 2026 at 11:55 AM Madison Church <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>> Hi Authors,
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> This is another friendly weekly reminder that we await content
> approvals from Christopher, Kazuho, and Eric before moving along with
> formatting updates for this document.
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Thank you!
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Madison Church
> >>>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> On Jan 27, 2026, at 2:37 PM, Madison Church <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> Hi Authors,
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> This is a friendly weekly reminder that we await content
> approvals from Christopher, Kazuho, and Eric before moving along with
> formatting updates for this document.
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> Thank you!
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> Madison Church
> >>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>> On Jan 17, 2026, at 6:37 PM, Eric Rescorla <[email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>> On Fri, Jan 16, 2026 at 2:37 PM Madison Church <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>> Hi All,
> >>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>> Paul - We have noted your approvals for the two proposed
> technical changes.
> >>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>> Nick - Thank you for your reply! We have noted your approval for
> the contents of this document on the AUTH48 status page and implemented
> your requested updates. The diff file was incredibly helpful!
> >>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>> We will wait for confirmation to implement the technical changes.
> >>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>> I will implement the technical changes in my copy.
> >>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>> -Ekr
> >>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>> Please review the contents of the document carefully. Contact us
> with any further updates or with your approval of the document’s contents
> in its current form. Once we receive approvals from Christopher, Kazuho,
> and Eric, we will move forward with formatting updates.
> >>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>> For details of the AUTH48 process in kramdown-rfc (including the
> two-part approval process), see
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
> >>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.txt
> >>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.pdf
> >>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.html
> >>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>> Markdown file:
> >>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.md
> >>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-diff.html
> (comprehensive diff)
> >>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-rfcdiff.html (side
> by side)
> >>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48diff.html
> (diff showing AUTH48 changes)
> >>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48rfcdiff.html
> (side by side)
> >>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>> Markdown diffs:
> >>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-diff.html
> >>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-rfcdiff.html
> >>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48diff.html
> >>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48rfcdiff.html
> >>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> >>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849
> >>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>> Thank you,
> >>>>>>>>> Madison Church
> >>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> On Jan 14, 2026, at 9:42 AM, Nick Sullivan <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> Hello RFC Production Center,
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> I reviewed the currently posted AUTH48 text for RFC-to-be 9849
> >>>>>>>>>> (rfc9849.txt on the RFC Editor authors page). Below are a small
> set of
> >>>>>>>>>> remaining editorial issues.
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> Two items that are technically non-editorial are already being
> handled
> >>>>>>>>>> in the TLS WG GitHub repository (issues 656 and 665 /
> corresponding
> >>>>>>>>>> open PRs). To avoid duplication, I am not requesting those
> changes
> >>>>>>>>>> here or requesting any expansion of RFC number placeholders (for
> >>>>>>>>>> example RFCYYY1) in this note.
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> A) Typos and minor editorial fixes (no intended technical
> change)
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> Section 5.1 (Encoding the ClientHelloInner)
> >>>>>>>>>> - Replace “structured defined” with “structure defined”.
> >>>>>>>>>> Section 6.1 (Offering ECH)
> >>>>>>>>>> - Capitalization: “Instead, It MUST …” -> “Instead, it MUST …”.
> >>>>>>>>>> Section 7 (Server Behavior introduction)
> >>>>>>>>>> - Consistency: “back-end server” -> “backend server”.
> >>>>>>>>>> Section 10.8 (Cookies)
> >>>>>>>>>> - Insert missing space: “unencrypted.This” -> “unencrypted.
> This”.
> >>>>>>>>>> Section 11.3 (ECH Configuration Extension Registry)
> >>>>>>>>>> - Fix grammar in the “Recommended” field description and remove
> >>>>>>>>>> duplicated wording (“value with a value of”).
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> Proposed patch (unified diff against the currently posted
> rfc9849.txt;
> >>>>>>>>>> excludes items already covered by issues 656 and 665; no RFC
> >>>>>>>>>> placeholder expansions)
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> ```
> >>>>>>>>>> --- rfc9849.txt
> >>>>>>>>>> +++ rfc9849.txt
> >>>>>>>>>> @@ -521,7 +521,7 @@
> >>>>>>>>>> -        structured defined in Section 5.3 of [RFC9147].  This
> does not
> >>>>>>>>>> +        structure defined in Section 5.3 of [RFC9147].  This
> does not
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> @@ -675,7 +675,7 @@
> >>>>>>>>>> -            ClientHelloInner.random.  Instead, It MUST
> generate a fresh
> >>>>>>>>>> +            ClientHelloInner.random.  Instead, it MUST
> generate a fresh
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> @@ -1129,7 +1129,7 @@
> >>>>>>>>>> -        the client-facing server or as the back-end server.
> Depending on the
> >>>>>>>>>> +        the client-facing server or as the backend server.
> Depending on the
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> @@ -1706,7 +1706,7 @@
> >>>>>>>>>> -        unencrypted.This means differences in cookies between
> backend
> >>>>>>>>>> +        unencrypted. This means differences in cookies between
> backend
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> @@ -2114,13 +2114,12 @@
> >>>>>>>>>> -   Recommended:  A "Y" or "N" value indicating if the
> extension is TLS
> >>>>>>>>>> -      WG recommends that the extension be supported.  This
> column is
> >>>>>>>>>> -      assigned a value of "N" unless explicitly requested.
> Adding a
> >>>>>>>>>> -      value with a value of "Y" requires Standards Action
> [RFC8126].
> >>>>>>>>>> +   Recommended:  A "Y" or "N" value indicating if the TLS
> Working Group
> >>>>>>>>>> +      recommends that the extension be supported.  This column
> is assigned a
> >>>>>>>>>> +      value of "N" unless explicitly requested.  Adding a
> value of "Y"
> >>>>>>>>>> +      requires Standards Action [RFC8126].
> >>>>>>>>>> ```
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> GitHub PR:
> https://github.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-esni/pull/671/files
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> With these changes, the publication is approved by me.
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> Thank you,
> >>>>>>>>>> Nick Sullivan
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>> On Mon, Jan 12, 2026 at 12:28 PM Nick Sullivan
> >>>>>>>>>> <[email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>> Hi Madison,
> >>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>> Apologies for the delay, I was intending to do this over the
> new year but didn't get to it. I'll review by end of week.
> >>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>> Best,
> >>>>>>>>>>> Nick
> >>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>> On Fri, Jan 9, 2026 at 10:31 AM Paul Wouters <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> approved (via email and at the PRs listed)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> Paul
> >>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>> On Thu, Jan 8, 2026 at 4:49 PM Madison Church <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Authors, *Paul,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Happy new year!
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> This is a friendly reminder that we have yet to hear back
> from you regarding the readiness of this document’s contents before moving
> forward with formatting updates.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> *Paul - As responsible AD for this document, please review
> the changes below and let us know if you approve:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-esni/pull/668
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-esni/pull/667
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status page, see:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
> >>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Dec 18, 2025, at 12:46 PM, Madison Church <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Eric,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for the followup! We have updated the AUTH48
> status page (https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849) and we will wait
> to hear from you once you complete your final content review.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Dec 18, 2025, at 12:33 PM, Eric Rescorla <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> FWIW I think Paul actually just approved this one change,
> not the overall RFC.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I have merged this markdown file into the version on
> GitHub. There are two pending
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> changes that are technically not just editorial, though I
> think obvious and need Paul's
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> approval:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-esni/pull/668
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://github.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-esni/pull/667
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> In parallel, I will also need to give it a final
> top-to-bottom read, which I hope to do in the next
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> week or so.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Thu, Dec 18, 2025 at 9:42 AM Madison Church <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Paul,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> We have marked your approval on the AUTH48 status page
> (see https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849).
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thanks!
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Dec 18, 2025, at 11:27 AM, Paul Wouters <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Dec 18, 2025, at 11:06, Madison Church <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Authors, *Paul,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> *Paul - As responsible AD, please note that we await
> your approval of RFC YYY1 as an Informative Reference (changed from
> Normative to Informative).
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> approved
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Paul
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Authors - This is a friendly reminder that we await
> approvals from each author prior to moving forward with formatting updates.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For details of the AUTH48 process in kramdown-rfc
> (including the two-part approval process), see
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.txt
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.pdf
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Markdown file:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.md
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please
> refresh):
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-diff.html
> (comprehensive diff)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-rfcdiff.html
> (side by side)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48diff.html (diff showing
> AUTH48 changes)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by
> side)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Markdown diffs:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-diff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-rfcdiff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48diff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48rfcdiff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Dec 11, 2025, at 10:07 AM, Madison Church <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Eric, *Paul,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Eric - Thank you for your reply! We weren’t sure if
> this was intentional, so thank you for clarifying. We have moved RFC YYY1
> to the Informative References section.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> *Paul - As responsible AD, please let us know if you
> approve RFC YYY1 as an Informative Reference.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Please review the contents of the document carefully.
> Contact us with any further updates or with your approval of the document’s
> contents in its current form. We will await approvals from each author
> prior to moving forward with formatting updates.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For details of the AUTH48 process in kramdown-rfc
> (including the two-part approval process), see
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.txt
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.pdf
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Markdown file:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.md
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please
> refresh):
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-diff.html
> (comprehensive diff)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-rfcdiff.html
> (side by side)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48diff.html (diff showing
> AUTH48 changes)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by
> side)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Markdown diffs:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-diff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-rfcdiff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48diff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48rfcdiff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Dec 5, 2025, at 4:38 PM, Eric Rescorla <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Madison,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I believe that the citation to RFCYYY1 should be
> informative, not normative. I corrected that in
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> my version but I guess I forgot to flag it. Paul,
> co-authors, any objections?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Fri, Dec 5, 2025 at 2:16 PM Madison Church <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Eric,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for the updated markdown file! We have
> incorporated your edits into the document. Upon further review, we have
> also updated the term "Shared Mode" to follow the same pattern as "Split
> Mode" (uppercase on first use and in titles, lowercase otherwise). Please
> let us know any objections. Additionally, we will update the WHATWG
> reference per our discussion during formatting. Aside from the updates
> mentioned, we have no further questions/comments at this time.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Please review the contents of the document carefully.
> Contact us with any further updates or with your approval of the document’s
> contents in its current form. We will await approvals from each author
> prior to moving forward with formatting updates.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For details of the AUTH48 process in kramdown-rfc
> (including the two-part approval process), see
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.txt
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.pdf
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Markdown file:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.md
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please
> refresh):
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-diff.html
> (comprehensive diff)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48diff.html (diff showing
> AUTH48 changes)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by
> side)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Markdown diffs:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-diff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-rfcdiff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48diff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48rfcdiff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Dec 4, 2025, at 7:12 PM, Eric Rescorla <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Here is an updated markdown file with the fixed width
> adjustments.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://raw.githubusercontent.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-esni/refs/heads/auth48/rfc9849.md
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Wed, Dec 3, 2025 at 9:49 AM Eric Rescorla <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Wed, Dec 3, 2025 at 6:23 AM Madison Church <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Eric,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for your reply! Please see inline.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Dec 2, 2025, at 1:38 PM, Eric Rescorla <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thanks.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Re the questions and comments:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> * I will send a revised file with the fixed width
> issues fixed
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Noted!
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> * As I understand the WHATWG question, there are two
> distinct issues (1) whether to reference a commit and (2) whether to
> reference fragments. I'm OK with referencing a commit like this if that's
> what you agreed with WHATWG, but I read this text as saying not to
> reference fragments unless we ensure that the anchor is permanent
> https://whatwg.org/working-mode#anchors. Have we done so for this one?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for clarifying. We are unsure if the
> current anchor [1] is permanent, so we would recommend not using it and
> using the more general one [2]. However, if any other authors put in a
> request with WHATWG to make that anchor permanent, please let us know.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [1] https://url.spec.whatwg.org/#concept-ipv4-parser
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [2] https://url.spec.whatwg.org/
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I think we are in agreement, then, thanks.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Tue, Dec 2, 2025 at 6:58 AM Madison Church <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Authors,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> This is a friendly weekly reminder that we await
> answers to the followup questions/comments below and your review of the
> document before continuing with the publication process. For details of the
> AUTH48 process in kramdown-rfc (including the two-part approval process),
> see:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Nov 25, 2025, at 8:34 AM, Madison Church <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi Eric,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you for your reply! We have updated the
> document as requested and have two followup items for your review, which
> can be viewed in the AUTH48 thread below or in the updated markdown file
> marked with "rfced".
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Nov 20, 2025, at 10:33 PM, Eric Rescorla <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Update: I fixed my affiliation.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Thu, Nov 20, 2025 at 8:23 PM Eric Rescorla <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you. I am editing this in GitHub. I merged
> in your proposed changes except
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> for those I think are inadvisable, which I
> reverted. I answered your questions inline.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> You can find the latest markdown file here (also
> attached):
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://raw.githubusercontent.com/tlswg/draft-ietf-tls-esni/refs/heads/auth48/rfc9849.md
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -Ekr
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Fri, Nov 14, 2025 at 10:53 AM <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Authors,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48,
> please resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in
> the source file.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] References
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> a) Regarding [WHATWG-IPV4], this reference's date
> is May 2021.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The URL provided resolves to a page with "Last
> Updated 12 May 2025".
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Note that WHATWG provides "commit snapshots" of
> their living standards and
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> there are several commit snapshots from May 2021
> with the latest being from 20
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> May 2021. For example: 20 May 2021
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (
> https://url.spec.whatwg.org/commit-snapshots/1b8b8c55eb4bed9f139c9a439fb1c1bf5566b619/#concept-ipv4-parser
> )
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> We recommend updating this reference to the most
> current version of the WHATWG
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Living Standard, replacing the URL with the more
> general URL to the standard
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (https://url.spec.whatwg.org/), and adding a
> "commit snapshot" URL to the
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> reference.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Current:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [WHATWG-IPV4]
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  WHATWG, "URL - IPv4 Parser", WHATWG Living
> Standard, May
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>   2021, <
> https://url.spec.whatwg.org/#concept-ipv4-parser>.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> EKR: Per MT, WHATWG has asked us not to do that.
> We should leave
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> this as-is and change the date to December 2025.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 1) For context, we reached out to WHATWG in
> September about a format for references to their standards (see:
> https://github.com/whatwg/meta/issues/363). The proposed update below for
> this reference reflects the approved format. It would be helpful for the
> RPC to know what WHATWG has asked authors to not do so that we can reach
> out for clarification and update our recommended citation if necessary.
> With this in mind, let us know if any updates need to be made.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> [WHATWG-IPV4]
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  WHATWG, "URL - IPv4 Parser", WHATWG Living
> Standard,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  <https://url.spec.whatwg.org/#concept-ipv4-parser
> >.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  Commit snapshot:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://url.spec.whatwg.org/commit-snapshots/1b8b8c55eb4bed9f139c9a439fb1c1bf5566b619/#concept-ipv4-parser
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Regarding the date, we don't recommend using a
> future date for a reference as it doesn't reflect the date for a currently
> published work (unless there is an anticipated update to the WHATWG
> specification in December 2025).
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> d) FYI, RFCYYY1 (draft-ietf-tls-svcb-ech) will be
> updated during the XML stage.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] We note that the following terms
> use fixed-width font
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> inconsistently. Please review these terms and let
> us know how we should update
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> or if there are any specific patterns that should
> be followed (e.g.,
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> fixed-width font used for field names, variants,
> etc.).
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> accept_confirmation
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> cipher_suite
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ClientHello
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ClientHelloInner
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ClientHelloOuter
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ClientHelloOuterAAD
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> config_id
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ECHClientHello
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ECHConfig
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ECHConfig.contents.public_name
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ECHConfigContents
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ECHConfigList
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> EncodedClientHelloInner
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> inner
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> maximum_name_length
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> outer
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> payload
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> public_key
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ServerHello.random
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> zeros
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> —>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> EKR: Thanks. Fixed width should be used for field
> names and other PDUs.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I notice that some of these are regular words
> (zeros) so you have to determine from context whether it's referring to
> some protocol element or just to the concept "carries an encrypted payload"
> versus "the payload field". Do you want to take a cut at changing as many
> of these as make sense and then I can review, or would you prefer I make
> the changes?
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> One question is what to do in definition lists.
> My sense is that the list heds should be non-fixed-width but maybe you have
> a convention.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 2) Thank you for offering to make changes. Please
> feel free to attach an updated markdown file containing the changes for
> terms using fixed-width font.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For definition lists, we typically leave this up
> to the authors to determine how they would like the terms to appear for
> consistency. For an example of terms in a definition list using a
> fixed-width font, see:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc9623.html#section-5.1.1.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.txt
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.pdf
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.xml
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849.md
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here
> (please refresh):
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-diff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48diff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by
> side)
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Markdown diffs:
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-diff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-rfcdiff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48diff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9849-md-auth48rfcdiff.html
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please
> see: https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9849.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> We will await approvals from each author prior to
> moving forward with formatting updates. For details of the AUTH48 process
> in kramdown-rfc (including the two-part approval process), see:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc.
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you!
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Madison Church
> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >>>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> --
> >>>>> Kazuho Oku
> >>>>> <rfc9849.txt.kazuho.diff>
> >>>>
> >>>
> >>
> >
>
>
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