Looks Good! --Jason Ekstrand
On Sat, Mar 30, 2013 at 12:11 AM, <matthias.cla...@gmail.com> wrote: > From: Matthias Clasen <mcla...@redhat.com> > > Turn the bullet-point list into complete sentences. > --- > doc/Wayland/en_US/Protocol.xml | 19 ++++--------------- > 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/doc/Wayland/en_US/Protocol.xml b/doc/Wayland/en_US/Protocol.xml > index cab68a8..955b054 100644 > --- a/doc/Wayland/en_US/Protocol.xml > +++ b/doc/Wayland/en_US/Protocol.xml > @@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ > <itemizedlist> > <listitem> > <para> > - The first word is the sender's object id (32-bit). > + The first word is the sender's object ID (32-bit). > </para> > </listitem> > <listitem> > @@ -167,20 +167,9 @@ > <section id="sect-Protocol-Connect-Time"> > <title>Connect Time</title> > <para> > - <itemizedlist> > - <listitem> > - <para> > - no fixed format connect block, the server emits a bunch of > - events at connect time > - </para> > - </listitem> > - <listitem> > - <para> > - presence events for global objects: output, compositor, input > - devices > - </para> > - </listitem> > - </itemizedlist> > + There is no fixed connection setup information, the server emits > + multiple events at connect time, to indicate the presence and > + properties of global objects: outputs, compositor, input devices. > </para> > </section> > <section id="sect-Protocol-Security-and-Authentication"> > -- > 1.8.1.4 > > _______________________________________________ > wayland-devel mailing list > wayland-devel@lists.freedesktop.org > http://lists.freedesktop.org/mailman/listinfo/wayland-devel _______________________________________________ wayland-devel mailing list wayland-devel@lists.freedesktop.org http://lists.freedesktop.org/mailman/listinfo/wayland-devel
