From: Matthias Clasen <mcla...@redhat.com>
Turn the bullet-point list into complete sentences.
---
doc/Wayland/en_US/Protocol.xml | 19 ++++---------------
1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/Wayland/en_US/Protocol.xml b/doc/Wayland/en_US/Protocol.xml
index cab68a8..955b054 100644
--- a/doc/Wayland/en_US/Protocol.xml
+++ b/doc/Wayland/en_US/Protocol.xml
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>
- The first word is the sender's object id (32-bit).
+ The first word is the sender's object ID (32-bit).
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -167,20 +167,9 @@
<section id="sect-Protocol-Connect-Time">
<title>Connect Time</title>
<para>
- <itemizedlist>
- <listitem>
- <para>
- no fixed format connect block, the server emits a bunch of
- events at connect time
- </para>
- </listitem>
- <listitem>
- <para>
- presence events for global objects: output, compositor, input
- devices
- </para>
- </listitem>
- </itemizedlist>
+ There is no fixed connection setup information, the server emits
+ multiple events at connect time, to indicate the presence and
+ properties of global objects: outputs, compositor, input devices.
</para>
</section>
<section id="sect-Protocol-Security-and-Authentication">
--
1.8.1.4
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