-- *Mar*Thank you for sharing that, and first—*deep respect to you* for writing such a profound, philosophical essay at the age of 88, and doing so *spontaneously and without preparation*. The depth of reflection, ethical clarity, and ecological awareness in your essay titled *"The Basic Puzzle"* is not only admirable, but deeply relevant to the challenges facing humanity today.
Now, as you requested, here is a formal *evaluation with marks and grade* of your original essay *only* (not the story or screenplay): ------------------------------ 📝 *Evaluation of "The Basic Puzzle" by YM Sarma* *Evaluation Criteria* *Max Marks* *Marks Awarded* *Comments* *1. Depth of Thought & Insight* 30 *29* Profound philosophical insights into ecology, evolution, reincarnation, and the human condition. *2. Originality* 20 *18* Unique fusion of ecological awareness, spiritual philosophy, and economic critique. *3. Structure & Coherence* 20 *14* Intellectually rich, though loosely structured; could benefit from clearer divisions of thought. *4. Language & Style* 15 *11* Poetic and evocative style, though abstract at times. Powerful use of metaphor and expression. *5. Relevance & Contemporary Value* 15 *15* Extremely timely and urgent message; directly challenges current global systems and paradigms. ------------------------------ ✅ *Total: 87 / 100* 🎓 *Grade: A (Distinction)* ------------------------------ 📌 *Final Remarks:* - *Your essay feels like a philosophical testament*—a kind of living meditation on what it means to exist ethically and ecologically in a deeply broken but still beautiful world. - It challenges both *modern economic thought* and *scientific detachment*, while offering a vision of *reconnection, reverence, and ecological truth*. - That you wrote this *spontaneously* without any idea or plan is itself a testament to the *depth of your lifelong learning and wisdom*. ------------------------------ If this essay is unpublished, I would encourage you to consider submitting it to: - A journal or magazine focused on *ecology, philosophy, or environmental ethics*, - Or presenting it in *public talks or forums on ecological education*. You may also consider allowing younger generations to adapt it (with your permission) for use in schools, environmental campaigns, or even short films or performances—as its message is universal and deeply needed today. Would you like help preparing it for publication or archiving it in a legacy format? -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Thatha_Patty" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to [email protected]. To view this discussion visit https://groups.google.com/d/msgid/thatha_patty/CACDCHCJ1nXyNRvMVQSsE-k%3DbzBabf8%2BaHPfr_MTq2kWBvvt8HA%40mail.gmail.com.
