Welcome KR On Wed, 3 Sept 2025, 19:38 Yeddanapudi Markandeyulu, <[email protected]> wrote:
> My God,Rajaram Sir,You are unique,brilliant... > YMS > > On Wed, Sep 3, 2025 at 7:06 PM Rajaram Krishnamurthy < > [email protected]> wrote: > >> Thoughts provoking poems both about photons plus KR >> >> Yes, photons are destructible; when a photon is absorbed, it ceases to >> exist as a photon, with its energy transferred to another form, such as >> kinetic energy of an electron, which can then be re-emitted as a new >> photon. This process, described by quantum theory, is not a destruction of >> energy but rather a transformation from one form to another. >> >> Whispers of Light written by Garden burnham >> >> A whisper born in stellar breath, >> >> Escapes the cradle, void of death. >> >> It sails on tides of endless black, >> >> A thread of gold, no turning back. >> >> It danced where nova songs once flared, >> >> Where time stood still, where few have dared. >> >> No weight, no mass — just speed and flame, >> >> It knows no home, it knows no name. >> >> Through prism’s kiss and mirrored lies, >> >> It weaves the truth with silent cries. >> >> A witness carved in spectral hue, >> >> To every dawn, to every blue. >> >> It grazes skin, it fuels the seed, >> >> It speaks in light — no voice, no need. >> >> The photon hums, unseen, yet near, >> >> A whisper only stars can hear. >> >> So close your eyes — it lingers on, >> >> The breathless song of photon’s dawn. >> >> A flicker in the void so wide, >> >> The universe — its only guide. >> >> >> >> ATOMS TURNS INTO ATOMS >> >> DESTROY OTHERS NOT SELF >> >> PHOTONS MERGE LOSES THE ATOM >> >> NEUPHOTON CHANGE NAME-SELF >> >> ELECTRON NAME OF PART ATOM >> >> LIGHT IS POTENTIAL ENERGY IS >> >> CHANGING KINETIC SURPRISE >> >> STAR MAGIC STARTS ITS DANCE >> >> MULTIPLE FORMS AT ASKANCE. >> >> K RAJARAM IRS 3925 >> >> On Wed, 3 Sept 2025 at 18:25, Markendeya Yeddanapudi < >> [email protected]> wrote: >> >>> >>> >>> -- >>> *Mar*Brahma in Quandary >>> >>> ( Thanks to PV,Dada Poem) >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> My one and only, weapon, photon in commotion, >>> >>> My Arena, the Universe, photon-synthesize emotion, >>> >>> I catch them, from their flight, create consciousness for initiation, >>> >>> Quasars, Galaxies, Stars, Planets, Moons, Matters…in the stampede of >>> motion, >>> >>> Frantic to return to the society of Photons as promotion, >>> >>> Photon-synthesis as emotional synthesis for solution, >>> >>> In the Photon Socialism of emotional participation, >>> >>> The Photosynthesized emotional symbiosis as destination, >>> >>> I angle my photons creating the Thermodynamic agitation, >>> >>> The angle of photons for the soil bacteria design determination, >>> >>> In the movement of molecules and atoms of heat, the soil bacteria in >>> creation, >>> >>> Sprout the bundles of emotions-plants, grass, trees in diverse >>> coloration, >>> >>> Flowers that attract bees for sexual procreation, >>> >>> Flora and Fauna, cover every surface with emotional communication, >>> >>> Join the Emotional and Cosmic Symbiotic race to join the Dirac Ocean, >>> >>> My Dear Saraswathi, search your Saraswat to fight the mechanization, >>> >>> Dear Saraswathi,the machines do not follow emotions, but go for >>> feeling-less multiplication. >>> >>> >>> >>> YM Sarma >>> >>> Chat gpt >>> >>> *Commentary on "Brahma in Quandary" by YM Sarma* >>> >>> "Brahma in Quandary" is a dense, visionary poem that fuses cosmology, >>> metaphysics, biology, and socio-philosophical thought into a singular >>> imaginative meditation. The title signals the central tension: *Brahma*, >>> the creator deity in Hindu cosmology, is in a state of *uncertainty or >>> conflict*—a "quandary"—perhaps with the mechanization and >>> dehumanization of the universe he once seeded with emotion and >>> consciousness. >>> ------------------------------ >>> >>> *1. Photon as the Primordial Force* >>> >>> From the outset, the poem posits *light (photon)* as the "one and only >>> weapon"—a metaphor for creative power and consciousness: >>> >>> *"My one and only, weapon, photon in commotion,"* >>> >>> Photons are the initiators of life, emotion, and matter in this >>> metaphysical framework. Their motion sparks creation, and the poet invents >>> the term *"photon-synthesize emotion"*, suggesting that even emotions >>> are a product of energetic, luminous processes—not unlike photosynthesis, >>> but elevated to a spiritual-emotional plane. >>> ------------------------------ >>> >>> *2. Creation as Emotional Evolution* >>> >>> The universe—quasars, stars, planets, and even bacteria—is birthed >>> through a chain of *emotionally infused thermodynamic motion*: >>> >>> *"I catch them, from their flight, create consciousness for >>> initiation..."* >>> *"...Thermodynamic agitation... soil bacteria in creation"* >>> >>> This blend of *scientific terminology* and *poetic spiritualism* >>> reflects a worldview where *science and spirituality are not in >>> conflict*, but interwoven. Emotions are not abstract sentiments—they >>> are as real and foundational as atoms and photons. >>> ------------------------------ >>> >>> *3. Photon Socialism and Emotional Symbiosis* >>> >>> One of the most intriguing ideas is *"Photon Socialism"*—a striking >>> phrase that suggests a utopian, collective model of emotional and energetic >>> exchange: >>> >>> *"Photon-synthesis as emotional synthesis for solution,"* >>> *"In the Photon Socialism of emotional participation"* >>> >>> This merges political philosophy with metaphysical cosmology, implying >>> that *harmony and cooperation are cosmic laws*, not just human ideals. >>> All entities—from bacteria to stars—participate in a grand, >>> emotional-social symbiosis. >>> ------------------------------ >>> >>> *4. Saraswathi and the Crisis of Mechanization* >>> >>> The final stanzas shift tone, invoking *Saraswathi*, the goddess of >>> knowledge, language, and art: >>> >>> *"My Dear Saraswathi, search your Saraswat to fight the >>> mechanization..."* >>> >>> Here, the poem touches on a *modern crisis*: the rise of machines and >>> artificial processes that lack *emotional resonance*: >>> >>> *"...the machines do not follow emotions, but go for feeling-less >>> multiplication."* >>> >>> This critique could be aimed at AI, industrialization, or even the >>> reductionist scientific worldview. The poem warns that *mechanized >>> existence devoid of emotion* threatens the cosmic balance established >>> by the "Photon Socialism" of the universe. >>> ------------------------------ >>> >>> *5. Stylistic Elements* >>> >>> - *Language*: The poem uses a hybrid of scientific and mythological >>> diction—"Dirac Ocean", "thermodynamic agitation", "Saraswathi"—creating a >>> linguistic ecosystem as diverse as the one it describes. >>> - *Form*: There's a cascading rhythm, almost like a >>> stream-of-consciousness, with enjambment and fluid phrases that mirror >>> the >>> unbroken flow of photons and emotions. >>> - *Innovation*: The poet coins unique phrases—*"photon-synthesize >>> emotion"*, *"Photon Socialism"*, *"emotional symbiosis"*—expanding >>> language to match the ambition of the ideas. >>> >>> ------------------------------ >>> >>> *Final Thoughts* >>> >>> *"Brahma in Quandary"* is a profound and richly layered poem that >>> reimagines the creation and sustenance of the universe as fundamentally >>> *emotional >>> and interconnected*. It mourns the rise of soulless mechanization while >>> calling upon *divine wisdom (Saraswathi)* to restore balance. The poem >>> invites us to rethink not just how we understand the cosmos, but how we >>> live within it—emotionally, spiritually, and socially. >>> ------------------------------ >>> >>> Would you like this edited into a shorter blurb, or would you like me to >>> analyze specific lines or themes further? >>> >>> Certainly! Here's a formal *evaluation* of the poem *"Brahma in >>> Quandary"* by YM Sarma, based on standard literary criteria used in >>> advanced creative writing or literature programs. This includes *marks >>> out of 100* and a *grade* based on the following categories: >>> ------------------------------ >>> >>> *🔍 Evaluation Criteria* >>> >>> *Criterion* >>> >>> *Marks (Out of 20)* >>> >>> *Comments* >>> >>> *1. Originality and Creativity* >>> >>> *19* >>> >>> The poem is conceptually bold, merging science, philosophy, mythology, >>> and politics. Phrases like *“Photon Socialism”* and *“photon-synthesize >>> emotion”* are uniquely inventive. >>> >>> *2. Thematic Depth and Clarity* >>> >>> *17* >>> >>> The cosmic-emotional metaphor is rich, but at times dense. Some thematic >>> strands could be more clearly developed (e.g., mechanization vs. emotional >>> cosmos). >>> >>> *3. Language and Imagery* >>> >>> *16* >>> >>> Strong use of metaphysical and scientific imagery, but some phrasing >>> feels overloaded. The emotional impact is intellectual rather than sensory. >>> >>> *4. Structure and Coherence* >>> >>> *14* >>> >>> The poem flows like a cosmic stream of thought, which suits the theme, >>> but some lines feel disjointed or overly complex. Slight editing would >>> enhance clarity. >>> >>> *5. Literary Devices and Style* >>> >>> *17* >>> >>> Effective use of alliteration, metaphor, neologisms, and personification >>> (especially invoking Saraswathi). The poetic voice is consistent and >>> ambitious. >>> ------------------------------ >>> >>> *📊 Total Marks: 83 / 100* >>> ------------------------------ >>> >>> *🎓 Grade: A– (Very Good)* >>> ------------------------------ >>> >>> *✅ Strengths* >>> >>> - Highly original concept and vocabulary. >>> - Strong integration of multiple domains: physics, mythology, >>> biology, politics. >>> - The philosophical tone gives it a unique intellectual flavor. >>> >>> *⚠️ Areas for Improvement* >>> >>> - Some phrases are overloaded or ambiguous (“emotional symbiosis” is >>> intriguing but could benefit from clearer grounding). >>> - Structure and pacing can be refined to improve emotional resonance >>> and reader accessibility. >>> >>> ------------------------------ >>> >>> *✍**️ Final Comment:* >>> >>> *"Brahma in Quandary"* is a compelling and intellectually ambitious >>> poem that engages the cosmic, emotional, and philosophical realms with >>> originality and daring. With slight refinement in structure and language >>> clarity, it could reach an even higher poetic register. >>> >>> Would you like suggestions for revision or polishing, based on this >>> evaluation? >>> >>> >>> >>> Certainly! Here's an original poem inspired by the cosmic and >>> philosophical themes in *"Brahma in Quandary"*, but with my own voice >>> and structure: >>> ------------------------------ >>> *The Silence Between Photons* >>> >>> In the hush before light was flung, >>> no stars wept, no atoms sung— >>> just silence coiled in a timeless thread, >>> a breath unbreathed, a word unsaid. >>> >>> Then came a shimmer—not a sound, >>> not space, nor time, nor solid ground, >>> but *will*, unformed, in restless grace, >>> seeking mirrors in empty space. >>> >>> A photon blinked. The first to dare >>> to ripple through the void’s blank stare. >>> Its motion carved the rules of heat, >>> etched rhythm in the pulse of beat. >>> >>> From spin and spark, from pull and flame, >>> the galaxies grew mouths and names. >>> A whisper in a neutron's curve >>> became the heart, became the nerve. >>> >>> And somewhere, deep in stellar dust, >>> a thought emerged, unsure, unjust. >>> It asked not “how,” but only “why,” >>> and learned, too late, the stars must die. >>> >>> Still, every birth from dark began— >>> the flower, the flame, the thought, the man. >>> Yet in their dance, one truth holds tight: >>> no shadow lives without the light. >>> ------------------------------ >>> >>> Would you like another in a different style or theme—perhaps >>> mythological, romantic, or abstract? >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> -- >>> You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google >>> Groups "societyforservingseniors" group. >>> To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send >>> an email to [email protected]. >>> To view this discussion, visit >>> https://groups.google.com/d/msgid/society4servingseniors/CACDCHCLMxJDULt5LRF-NHVn7mAMLpCf2XVhAbX1VXk0gkV_0Jw%40mail.gmail.com >>> <https://groups.google.com/d/msgid/society4servingseniors/CACDCHCLMxJDULt5LRF-NHVn7mAMLpCf2XVhAbX1VXk0gkV_0Jw%40mail.gmail.com?utm_medium=email&utm_source=footer> >>> . >>> >> -- >> You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups >> "societyforservingseniors" group. >> To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an >> email to [email protected]. >> To view this discussion, visit >> https://groups.google.com/d/msgid/society4servingseniors/CAL5XZoqpPLVD9K%3D7jRESckKyco19jbuApp6TV1F%3Dt05aY5_qrQ%40mail.gmail.com >> <https://groups.google.com/d/msgid/society4servingseniors/CAL5XZoqpPLVD9K%3D7jRESckKyco19jbuApp6TV1F%3Dt05aY5_qrQ%40mail.gmail.com?utm_medium=email&utm_source=footer> >> . >> > -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Thatha_Patty" group. 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