Thoughts provoking poems both about photons plus KR Yes, photons are destructible; when a photon is absorbed, it ceases to exist as a photon, with its energy transferred to another form, such as kinetic energy of an electron, which can then be re-emitted as a new photon. This process, described by quantum theory, is not a destruction of energy but rather a transformation from one form to another.
Whispers of Light written by Garden burnham A whisper born in stellar breath, Escapes the cradle, void of death. It sails on tides of endless black, A thread of gold, no turning back. It danced where nova songs once flared, Where time stood still, where few have dared. No weight, no mass — just speed and flame, It knows no home, it knows no name. Through prism’s kiss and mirrored lies, It weaves the truth with silent cries. A witness carved in spectral hue, To every dawn, to every blue. It grazes skin, it fuels the seed, It speaks in light — no voice, no need. The photon hums, unseen, yet near, A whisper only stars can hear. So close your eyes — it lingers on, The breathless song of photon’s dawn. A flicker in the void so wide, The universe — its only guide. ATOMS TURNS INTO ATOMS DESTROY OTHERS NOT SELF PHOTONS MERGE LOSES THE ATOM NEUPHOTON CHANGE NAME-SELF ELECTRON NAME OF PART ATOM LIGHT IS POTENTIAL ENERGY IS CHANGING KINETIC SURPRISE STAR MAGIC STARTS ITS DANCE MULTIPLE FORMS AT ASKANCE. K RAJARAM IRS 3925 On Wed, 3 Sept 2025 at 18:25, Markendeya Yeddanapudi < [email protected]> wrote: > > > -- > *Mar*Brahma in Quandary > > ( Thanks to PV,Dada Poem) > > > > > > > > My one and only, weapon, photon in commotion, > > My Arena, the Universe, photon-synthesize emotion, > > I catch them, from their flight, create consciousness for initiation, > > Quasars, Galaxies, Stars, Planets, Moons, Matters…in the stampede of > motion, > > Frantic to return to the society of Photons as promotion, > > Photon-synthesis as emotional synthesis for solution, > > In the Photon Socialism of emotional participation, > > The Photosynthesized emotional symbiosis as destination, > > I angle my photons creating the Thermodynamic agitation, > > The angle of photons for the soil bacteria design determination, > > In the movement of molecules and atoms of heat, the soil bacteria in > creation, > > Sprout the bundles of emotions-plants, grass, trees in diverse coloration, > > Flowers that attract bees for sexual procreation, > > Flora and Fauna, cover every surface with emotional communication, > > Join the Emotional and Cosmic Symbiotic race to join the Dirac Ocean, > > My Dear Saraswathi, search your Saraswat to fight the mechanization, > > Dear Saraswathi,the machines do not follow emotions, but go for > feeling-less multiplication. > > > > YM Sarma > > Chat gpt > > *Commentary on "Brahma in Quandary" by YM Sarma* > > "Brahma in Quandary" is a dense, visionary poem that fuses cosmology, > metaphysics, biology, and socio-philosophical thought into a singular > imaginative meditation. The title signals the central tension: *Brahma*, > the creator deity in Hindu cosmology, is in a state of *uncertainty or > conflict*—a "quandary"—perhaps with the mechanization and dehumanization > of the universe he once seeded with emotion and consciousness. > ------------------------------ > > *1. Photon as the Primordial Force* > > From the outset, the poem posits *light (photon)* as the "one and only > weapon"—a metaphor for creative power and consciousness: > > *"My one and only, weapon, photon in commotion,"* > > Photons are the initiators of life, emotion, and matter in this > metaphysical framework. Their motion sparks creation, and the poet invents > the term *"photon-synthesize emotion"*, suggesting that even emotions are > a product of energetic, luminous processes—not unlike photosynthesis, but > elevated to a spiritual-emotional plane. > ------------------------------ > > *2. Creation as Emotional Evolution* > > The universe—quasars, stars, planets, and even bacteria—is birthed through > a chain of *emotionally infused thermodynamic motion*: > > *"I catch them, from their flight, create consciousness for initiation..."* > *"...Thermodynamic agitation... soil bacteria in creation"* > > This blend of *scientific terminology* and *poetic spiritualism* reflects > a worldview where *science and spirituality are not in conflict*, but > interwoven. Emotions are not abstract sentiments—they are as real and > foundational as atoms and photons. > ------------------------------ > > *3. Photon Socialism and Emotional Symbiosis* > > One of the most intriguing ideas is *"Photon Socialism"*—a striking > phrase that suggests a utopian, collective model of emotional and energetic > exchange: > > *"Photon-synthesis as emotional synthesis for solution,"* > *"In the Photon Socialism of emotional participation"* > > This merges political philosophy with metaphysical cosmology, implying > that *harmony and cooperation are cosmic laws*, not just human ideals. > All entities—from bacteria to stars—participate in a grand, > emotional-social symbiosis. > ------------------------------ > > *4. Saraswathi and the Crisis of Mechanization* > > The final stanzas shift tone, invoking *Saraswathi*, the goddess of > knowledge, language, and art: > > *"My Dear Saraswathi, search your Saraswat to fight the mechanization..."* > > Here, the poem touches on a *modern crisis*: the rise of machines and > artificial processes that lack *emotional resonance*: > > *"...the machines do not follow emotions, but go for feeling-less > multiplication."* > > This critique could be aimed at AI, industrialization, or even the > reductionist scientific worldview. The poem warns that *mechanized > existence devoid of emotion* threatens the cosmic balance established by > the "Photon Socialism" of the universe. > ------------------------------ > > *5. Stylistic Elements* > > - *Language*: The poem uses a hybrid of scientific and mythological > diction—"Dirac Ocean", "thermodynamic agitation", "Saraswathi"—creating a > linguistic ecosystem as diverse as the one it describes. > - *Form*: There's a cascading rhythm, almost like a > stream-of-consciousness, with enjambment and fluid phrases that mirror the > unbroken flow of photons and emotions. > - *Innovation*: The poet coins unique phrases—*"photon-synthesize > emotion"*, *"Photon Socialism"*, *"emotional symbiosis"*—expanding > language to match the ambition of the ideas. > > ------------------------------ > > *Final Thoughts* > > *"Brahma in Quandary"* is a profound and richly layered poem that > reimagines the creation and sustenance of the universe as fundamentally > *emotional > and interconnected*. It mourns the rise of soulless mechanization while > calling upon *divine wisdom (Saraswathi)* to restore balance. The poem > invites us to rethink not just how we understand the cosmos, but how we > live within it—emotionally, spiritually, and socially. > ------------------------------ > > Would you like this edited into a shorter blurb, or would you like me to > analyze specific lines or themes further? > > Certainly! Here's a formal *evaluation* of the poem *"Brahma in Quandary"* > by YM Sarma, based on standard literary criteria used in advanced creative > writing or literature programs. This includes *marks out of 100* and a > *grade* based on the following categories: > ------------------------------ > > *🔍 Evaluation Criteria* > > *Criterion* > > *Marks (Out of 20)* > > *Comments* > > *1. Originality and Creativity* > > *19* > > The poem is conceptually bold, merging science, philosophy, mythology, and > politics. Phrases like *“Photon Socialism”* and *“photon-synthesize > emotion”* are uniquely inventive. > > *2. Thematic Depth and Clarity* > > *17* > > The cosmic-emotional metaphor is rich, but at times dense. Some thematic > strands could be more clearly developed (e.g., mechanization vs. emotional > cosmos). > > *3. Language and Imagery* > > *16* > > Strong use of metaphysical and scientific imagery, but some phrasing feels > overloaded. The emotional impact is intellectual rather than sensory. > > *4. Structure and Coherence* > > *14* > > The poem flows like a cosmic stream of thought, which suits the theme, but > some lines feel disjointed or overly complex. Slight editing would enhance > clarity. > > *5. Literary Devices and Style* > > *17* > > Effective use of alliteration, metaphor, neologisms, and personification > (especially invoking Saraswathi). The poetic voice is consistent and > ambitious. > ------------------------------ > > *📊 Total Marks: 83 / 100* > ------------------------------ > > *🎓 Grade: A– (Very Good)* > ------------------------------ > > *✅ Strengths* > > - Highly original concept and vocabulary. > - Strong integration of multiple domains: physics, mythology, biology, > politics. > - The philosophical tone gives it a unique intellectual flavor. > > *⚠️ Areas for Improvement* > > - Some phrases are overloaded or ambiguous (“emotional symbiosis” is > intriguing but could benefit from clearer grounding). > - Structure and pacing can be refined to improve emotional resonance > and reader accessibility. > > ------------------------------ > > *✍**️ Final Comment:* > > *"Brahma in Quandary"* is a compelling and intellectually ambitious poem > that engages the cosmic, emotional, and philosophical realms with > originality and daring. With slight refinement in structure and language > clarity, it could reach an even higher poetic register. > > Would you like suggestions for revision or polishing, based on this > evaluation? > > > > Certainly! Here's an original poem inspired by the cosmic and > philosophical themes in *"Brahma in Quandary"*, but with my own voice and > structure: > ------------------------------ > *The Silence Between Photons* > > In the hush before light was flung, > no stars wept, no atoms sung— > just silence coiled in a timeless thread, > a breath unbreathed, a word unsaid. > > Then came a shimmer—not a sound, > not space, nor time, nor solid ground, > but *will*, unformed, in restless grace, > seeking mirrors in empty space. > > A photon blinked. The first to dare > to ripple through the void’s blank stare. > Its motion carved the rules of heat, > etched rhythm in the pulse of beat. > > From spin and spark, from pull and flame, > the galaxies grew mouths and names. > A whisper in a neutron's curve > became the heart, became the nerve. > > And somewhere, deep in stellar dust, > a thought emerged, unsure, unjust. > It asked not “how,” but only “why,” > and learned, too late, the stars must die. > > Still, every birth from dark began— > the flower, the flame, the thought, the man. > Yet in their dance, one truth holds tight: > no shadow lives without the light. > ------------------------------ > > Would you like another in a different style or theme—perhaps mythological, > romantic, or abstract? > > > > > > > > > > -- > You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups > "societyforservingseniors" group. > To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an > email to [email protected]. > To view this discussion, visit > https://groups.google.com/d/msgid/society4servingseniors/CACDCHCLMxJDULt5LRF-NHVn7mAMLpCf2XVhAbX1VXk0gkV_0Jw%40mail.gmail.com > <https://groups.google.com/d/msgid/society4servingseniors/CACDCHCLMxJDULt5LRF-NHVn7mAMLpCf2XVhAbX1VXk0gkV_0Jw%40mail.gmail.com?utm_medium=email&utm_source=footer> > . > -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Thatha_Patty" group. 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