Rajaram Sir,
Yours is the versatility and mastery of the Universe.
YM Sarma

On Mon, Aug 18, 2025 at 8:13 AM Rajaram Krishnamurthy <[email protected]>
wrote:

> TELEPORTATION
>
> Yes, various Hindu texts, including Puranas and Upanishads, mention
> abilities analogous to teleportation as mystic powers called siddhis or
> miraculous acts by deities and sages, rather than as literal scientific
> phenomena or a commonplace method of travel. These texts describe figures
> like Narada and Lord Krishna teleporting or appearing in multiple places
> simultaneously as a result of their spiritual attainment and divine nature.
> These abilities are typically understood as supernatural manifestations of
> concentrated spiritual energy rather than physical transportation.
>
> Siddhis: In yogic and spiritual traditions, teleportation is considered a
> "siddhi" (mystic perfection) that can be attained through deep spiritual
> practice, meditation, and inner awareness.
>
> Mind-Speed (Mano-javah): Mano-javah is described as the ability to travel
> at the speed of the mind, a form of teleportation through mental will,
> according to some interpretations.
>
> Antardhyaan hona: This practice is mentioned as a form of teleportation
> achieved through meditation, allowing for personal, instantaneous
> relocation.
>
> Lord Krishna: Stories recount Krishna being present with the gopis of
> Vrindavan in multiple locations at the same time, implying a form of
> spiritual teleportation.
>
> Lord Hanuman: In the Ramayana, Hanuman's ability to change his size from a
> mountain to a fly suggests a mastery over his physical form that is beyond
> normal understanding, related to altering mass.
>
> Narada: The sage Narada is also mentioned as having the power of
> instantaneous travel between different realms or locations.
>
> Spiritual Practice vs. Technology:
>
> The texts emphasize that these are not technologies but rather byproducts
> of advanced spiritual discipline and inner transformation.
>
> They caution that focusing on obtaining siddhis should not be the primary
> goal of spiritual practice, as it can become a distraction from the
> ultimate purpose of enlightenment.
>
> 2         *Quantum Entanglement* is a physical phenomenon that occurs
> when pairs or groups of particles are generated or interact in ways such
> that the quantum state of each particle cannot be described independently
> of the others...Or to put in the simple terms. Even the farthest points in
> the cosmos are related and respond to each other through ‘something’.
> Here's what Manu Smriti has to say.
>
> Verse 1.27 [Creation of Gross and Subtle things]
>
> अण्व्यो मात्रा विनाशिन्यो दशार्धानां तु याः स्मृताः ।
>
> ताभिः सार्धमिदं सर्वं सम्भवत्यनुपूर्वशः ॥ २७ ॥
>
> aṇvyo mātrā vināśinyo daśārdhānāṃ tu yāḥ smṛtāḥ |
>
> tābhiḥ sārdhamidaṃ sarvaṃ sambhavatyanupūrvaśaḥ || 26 ||
>
> The evanescent subtile constituents of the half-ten (Elemental Substances)
> that have been described, along with those, this whole (world) comes forth,
> in due order. — (27)
>
> Medhātithi’s commentary (manubhāṣya):  This verse sums up what has gone
> before. ‘Of the half-ten’—i.e., of the five elemental substances;—‘the
> subtile,’—minute,—‘constituents,’—parts; i.e., the ‘Rudimentary
> substances’; these are ‘evanescent’;—they are called ‘evanescent’ (liable
> to destruction) in the sense that, being liable to undergo modifications,
> they take up grosser forms.—‘along with those,' ‘this whole’—world,—‘comes
> forth,’—is produced;—‘in due order,’—in proper sequence; i.e., from the
> subtile the gross, and from the gross the grosser; or in the order in which
> they have been described (in the foregoing verses).—(27)
>
> Explanatory notes by Ganganath Jha       ‘Vināśinyaḥ’—because liable to
> change into gross substances (Medhātithi, Govinda and Kullūka); or because
> they are products (Rāghavā.)
>
> 1.27 But with the minute perishable particles of the five (elements) which
> have been mentioned, this whole(world) is framed in due order.
>
> This sloka in its core talks about the same fundamental sub-atomic
> elements  being the building blocks of everything in the known universe.
>
>
>
> Verse 1.20
>
> आद्याद्यस्य गुणं त्वेषामवाप्नोति परः परः ।
>
> यो यो यावतिथश्चैषां स स तावद् गुणः स्मृतः ॥ २० ॥
>
> ādyādyasya guṇaṃ tveṣāmavāpnoti paraḥ paraḥ |
>
> yo yo yāvatithaścaiṣāṃ sa sa tāvad guṇaḥ smṛtaḥ || 20 ||
>
> Among these (Elementary Substances), each succeeding one acquires the
> quality of what precedes it; and each elemental substance is endowed with
> as many qualities as the place it occupies (in the order in which the said
> substances are set forth). —(20)
>
> Medhātithi’s commentary (manubhāṣya):
>
> In the preceding verse some people offer a different explanation of the
> number ‘seven’:—(1) The five organs of sensation, the Eye and the rest,
> taken together from a single group; they are regarded as ‘one’ on account
> of their possessing the common character of being the instruments of
> perception;—(2) similarly the five organs of action; these two, forming two
> groups, are ‘two principles’;—(3-7) the five elemental substances, being
> treated individually, by reason of their functions being distinct from one
> another, are the ‘seven principles’; and the five Rudimentary Substances
> and the principle of Egoism are the ‘subtile constituents’ that go to make
> up the ‘bodies’ of the said seven;—i.e., these seven are the products of
> evolution from the said six.—The rest of the verse is explained in the same
> manner as set forth above.
>
> Thus, in accordance with this explanation, the Elemental Substances having
> been spoken of in the preceding verse (19), the pronoun ‘eṣām,’ ‘among
> these,’ refers to those same substances. Though there are several words
> intervening (between the mention of Elemental Substances in verse (19) and
> the pronoun ‘among these’ in the present verse), which are in closer
> proximity to the pronoun, yet, as a matter of fact, what Is described in
> the present verse,—the fact of ‘these’ being endowed with a particular
> number of qualities derived from well-defined sources—is applicable only to
> the Elementary Substances, and not to other things; even though these
> latter may form the subject-matter of the context (and may as such, be
> capable of being referred to by the pronoun in question).
>
> The meaning of the verse thus comes to this:—‘Among these’ Elemental
> Substances,—which are set out (later on) in a definite order of sequence,
> one preceding the other—the ‘succeeding one’ acquires the quality of the
> preceding one, through its connection with it.—The term ‘quality’ here
> stands for the five, Sound and the rest;—the ‘preceding’ (and ‘succeeding’)
> is in reference to the order in which the names of the Elemental Substances
> are set forth in verse 75 below, where it is said that ‘first of all Ākāśa
> is produced &c., &c.’ The fact of sound &c., being the qualities of these
> substances will also bo described in that same verse.—Among Ākāśa and the
> rest, each one occupies a definite place in the order in which they are set
> forth; the term ‘yāvatithaḥ’ means the number of the place occupied by it;
> the word being formed by the adding of the affix ‘ithuk,’ by Pāṇini’s Sūtra
> 5.2.53. The meaning is that each substance becomes endowed with as many
> qualities as the place, second or third, &c., occupied by it; that is, the
> substance occupying the second place in the order of sequence has two
> qualities, that occupying the third place has three, and so on.
>
> The first half of the verse means that among the Elemental Substances,
> each succeeding one acquires the quality of its predecessor; and each of
> them is later on (under verses 75 &c.) described has having one quality
> inherent in itself; for instance, ‘Ākāśa is known as possessing the quality
> of sound’ (verse 75); ‘Fire is described as possessing the quality of
> colour’ (verse 77), and so forth; so that acquiring one quality from its
> predecessor (and having one inherent in itself) each substance would appear
> to be endowed with only two qualities,—with the sole exception of Ākāśa
> (which, having no substance ‘preceding’ it, would have the single quality
> of Sound, which is inherent in itself); hence with a view to preclude such
> an idea, the author has added the the second half of the verse—Each
> Elemental Substance being endowed with as many qualities &c. &c.,—which
> means that Wind has two qualities, Fire has three, Water has four, and
> Earth has five.
>
> Mahābhārata, 12.232.8.—‘The qualities of the preceding go over to the
> succeeding and whatever it is and in whatever form and place, so many
> qualities it is declared to possess.’
>
> 1.20 Among them each succeeding (element) acquires the quality of the
> preceding one, and whatever place (in the sequence) each of them occupies,
> even so many qualities it is declared to possess.This sloka mentions that
> since everything is made from the same basic elements, they also have the
> qualities of each other.
>
>
>
> Verse 1.26 [Differentiation of Virtue and Vice]
>
> कर्मणां च विवेकार्थं धर्माधर्मौ व्यवेचयत् ।
>
> द्वन्द्वैरयोजयच्चैमाः सुखदुःखादिभिः प्रजाः ॥ २६ ॥
>
> karmaṇāṃ ca vivekārthaṃ dharmādharmau vyavecayat |
>
> dvandvairayojayaccaimāḥ sukhaduḥkhādibhiḥ prajāḥ || 26 ||
>
> For the due discrimination of actions, he differentiated Virtue and Vice;
> and he connected these creatures with such pairs of opposites as
> Pleasure-Pain and the like.—(26)
>
> Medhātithi’s commentary (manubhāṣya):
>
> ‘He differentiated Virtue and Vice’—He fixed their character by due
> distinction, i.e., as distinct from each other; in such form—‘this is
> Virtue, that is Vice.’
>
> Further, the term ‘action’ may be taken as standing for the effects of the
> actions,—the cause being figuratively spoken of as the effect. Thus the
> meaning comes to be as follows:—‘He differentiated actions for the due
> discrimination of the effects of actions.’
>
> In view of the question as to what is the ‘discrimination of the effects
> of actions,’ it is added—‘he connected them with pairs of opposites, in the
> shape of Pleasure-Pain and the like’;—‘Pleasure’ being the effect of
> ‘Virtue’ and ‘Pain’ of ‘Vice.’ It is thus that people performing both kind
> of actions become associated with these pairs of opposites; by performing
> virtuous acts they become associated with pleasure, and by performing
> vicious acts they become connected with pain.
>
> 1.26. Moreover, in order to distinguish actions, he separated merit from
> demerit, and he caused the creatures to be affected by the pairs (of
> opposites), such as pain and pleasure.
>
>
>
> And here is the symbolism for inherent duality in nature that quantum
> mechanics advocate.Coming to the relation part...1.50. The (various)
> conditions in this always terrible and constantly changing circle of births
> and deaths to which created beings are subject, are stated to begin with
> (that of) Brahman, and to end with (that of) these (just mentioned
> immovable creatures).
>
> Einstein called it Ether, Particle Physics calls it Higgs Field
>
> And Quantum Mechanics calls it Entanglement
>
> In Hinduism it is ‘Brahman’ or ‘Consciousness’
>
> ‘Brahman’ is the force behind creation and reason behind entanglement of
> everything in the universe.
>
> 3        ŚB 11.15.4-5
>
> अणिमा महिमा मूर्तेर्लघिमा प्राप्तिरिन्द्रियै: ।
>
> प्राकाम्यं श्रुतद‍ृष्टेषु शक्तिप्रेरणमीशिता ॥ ४ ॥
>
> गुणेष्वसङ्गो वशिता यत्कामस्तदवस्यति ।
>
> एता मे सिद्धय: सौम्य अष्टावौत्पत्तिका मता: ॥ ५ ॥
>
> aṇimā mahimā mūrter
>
> laghimā *prāptir* indriyaiḥ (teleportation)
>
> prākāmyaṁ śruta-dṛṣṭeṣu
>
> śakti-preraṇam īśitā
>
> guṇeṣv asaṅgo vaśitā
>
> yat-kāmas tad avasyati
>
> etā me siddhayaḥ saumya
>
> aṣṭāv autpattikā matāḥ
>
> Among the eight primary mystic perfections, the three by which one
> transforms one’s own body are aṇimā, becoming smaller than the smallest;
> mahimā, becoming greater than the greatest; and laghimā, becoming lighter
> than the lightest. Through the perfection of prāpti one acquires whatever
> one desires, and through prākāmya-siddhi one experiences any enjoyable
> object, either in this world or the next. Through īśitā-siddhi one can
> manipulate the subpotencies of māyā, and through the controlling potency
> called vaśitā-siddhi one is unimpeded by the three modes of nature. One who
> has acquired kāmāvasāyitā-siddhi can obtain anything from anywhere, to the
> highest possible limit. My dear gentle Uddhava, these eight mystic
> perfections are considered to be naturally existing and unexcelled within
> this world.
>
> 4           Quantum entanglement happens when two or more quantum
> particles interact and become inextricably linked, sharing an identical
> quantum state even when separated by vast distances. The state of one
> entangled particle instantaneously influences the state of the other upon
> measurement, regardless of the distance between them, a phenomenon Albert
> Einstein famously called "spooky action at a distance". This connection
> arises from the nature of quantum objects existing in superpositions and
> can be generated by physically strong interactions between particles, such
> as photons or electrons, or by being the result of the same event.
>
> How particles become entangled            Interaction and common origin:
> Particles can become entangled if they interact strongly with each other or
> if they are produced from the same event, like a single photon decaying
> into two entangled photons.
>
> Shared quantum state: After becoming entangled, the particles are
> described by a single, non-separable quantum state, rather than independent
> ones.
>
> Superposition: At the subatomic level, particles can exist in multiple
> states simultaneously (superposition). When entangled, the measurement of
> one particle "collapses" its superposition, and this instantaneously
> determines the state of its entangled partner.
>
> This video explains how quantum entanglement arises from interacting
> particles:   https://youtu.be/eWra029qFcY
>
> Key characteristics of quantum entanglement
>
> Instantaneous correlation: When you measure a property of one entangled
> particle (like its spin), you instantaneously know the corresponding
> property of the other entangled particle, no matter how far apart they are.
>
> Random but correlated outcomes: Before measurement, the individual state
> of each particle is random and unpredictable. However, the outcomes are
> perfectly correlated. For example, if one entangled particle's spin is
> measured as "up," its partner's spin will always be "down".
>
> Non-separability: The mathematical description of entangled particles
> cannot be separated into independent descriptions for each particle; they
> must be described as a single composite system.
>
> Why it's "spooky"    Einstein used the word spooky; so ancient Hindus
> narrated that spooky one as KOODU VITTU KOODU PAYTGHAL; OR PARAKAYA
> PRAVESAM; OR  WANDERING IN AIR; ATOM MAY DO IT UNDER QUANTUM ENTANGLEMENT
> IN MODERN SCIENCE; BUT ANCIENT RISHIS USED ANOTHER WORD TO DESCRIBE. Thus
> teleportation do require high mental control.
>
> Violation of classical intuition: Entanglement defies classical physics,
> where effects require physical contact or signals traveling at or below the
> speed of light. The instantaneous connection in entanglement seems to
> happen faster than light, though it cannot be used for faster-than-light
> communication.
>
> Experimental proof: The reality of quantum entanglement has been
> repeatedly proven through numerous experiments, solidifying it as a
> fundamental aspect of the quantum world.  SO, PARAKAYA PRAAVESAM IS
> FEASIBLE ALSO AS DONE BY ADI SHANKARA, TIRUMULAR AND SO MANY OTHERS.
>
> K RAJARAM IRS 18825
>
> On Mon, 18 Aug 2025 at 06:54, Markendeya Yeddanapudi <
> [email protected]> wrote:
>
>>
>>
>> --
>> *Mar*Teleportation
>>
>>
>>
>> Teleportation means the instant transport. Very speedy travel via jet
>> planes and rockets via satellites is now happening. May be the speed may
>> increase, to become instant. But that is because of technology. One does
>> not automatically perceive and understand. One actually gets shut from
>> nature seated in the Plane or Rocket or Satellite.
>>
>> The universe is a gigantic network of communications and pulsations. We
>> may adopt the meaning of instant perception and understandings by feeling
>> the network, and achieving perception and understanding, to the word
>> Teleportation. We are all part of the network of communications and
>> pulsations of the universe. Real communication means feeling and
>> recognizing and even understanding. As nature is connected and actually
>> vibrating and pulsing due to the connections, we may develop a yoga that
>> enables us to use the nature’s networking nervous system.
>>
>> May be all of us are actually having the dormant faculties, of telepathy,
>> telekinesis and teleportation. They have become dormant because we are
>> freezing our natural endowments by using machines to do our actual living.
>>
>> May be we can make our cognition traverse very large distances, via
>> feeling by using the network of communications and vibrations and
>> pulsations, by converting the feeling into sensing, perceiving and
>> understanding, by participating in the macro nervous system of nature.?
>>
>>  In science fiction, the hypothetical fantasies are that there will be
>> instant arrivals without traversing the distance. In most writings it means
>> the instant arrival as a 3D body, without traversing the in-between
>> distance, by bypassing it.
>>
>> But the meaning I give is the faculty of using the network of nature, via
>> feeling. Actually, have we lost our natural endowment of teleportation,
>> which means the expansion of perception and understanding? After all, there
>> are even today, tribes in the interior forests who can sense earthquakes,
>> tsunamis, rains etc in advance. We have seen many animals knowing in
>> advance even before the actual earthquakes, tsunamis etc.
>>
>>  If you can see everything and if you are not limited to 00.0035% of the
>> totality, as your eyes can see that much only, and if you expand your
>> perception by feeling and sensing, you may achieve the experience of actual
>> presence in the distance as teleportation.
>>
>> We have to recognize the fact that free and healthy nature is a network
>> of connections and communications, the macro nervous system of nature.
>> Technology is making us repudiate our natural faculties as we have been
>> freezing them by using machines to do the work of our limbs.
>>
>> By being continuously ensnared in technology, our universities are
>> actually disabling the students from using their natural endowments.
>>
>> Every University must start a ‘Free Nature Park without human Tampering’,
>> so that the students actually unearth and expand their natural faculties.
>> The planet earth actually is Bhoodevi, with macro feelings and the nervous
>> system consisting of the flora and the fauna. Teleportation in the shape of
>> the out of the body travel can be achieved, by using the natural network of
>> communications in nature.
>>
>> YM Sarma
>>
>> Chat gpt
>>
>> Thank you for sharing this reflective and thought-provoking piece on
>> *Teleportation*, written by YM Sarma. It blends concepts from *science,
>> nature, philosophy, ancient wisdom, and modern technology* to present a
>> reimagined idea of teleportation—not just as physical transportation, but
>> as *expanded perception and deep connectivity* with the natural world.
>>
>> Here’s a summary and interpretation of the key themes in the writing:
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> *🌀 Reimagining Teleportation*
>>
>> *Traditional View (Science Fiction):*
>>
>>    - Instant physical travel from one point to another.
>>    - Bypassing space and distance, usually with advanced technology.
>>
>> *Author’s View:*
>>
>>    - A deeper form of *instant presence*, not by moving physically, but
>>    by *expanding awareness and perception*.
>>    - Not mechanical, but *organic*—rooted in nature and inner human
>>    faculties.
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> *🌿 Nature as a Communication Network*
>>
>>    - The *universe is seen as a vibrating, pulsing, interconnected
>>    system*—a sort of *macro nervous system*.
>>    - All beings are a part of this system.
>>    - Communication in this sense is *not verbal or digital*, but *intuitive,
>>    sensory, and feeling-based*.
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> *🧠 Dormant Human Faculties*
>>
>>    - Modern humans may have *dormant capabilities* like:
>>       - *Telepathy* (mind-to-mind connection)
>>       - *Telekinesis* (moving objects with thought)
>>       - *Teleportation* (expanded awareness or presence)
>>    - These have become inactive due to *overreliance on machines and
>>    technology*.
>>    - We have *outsourced* our sensing, feeling, and understanding to
>>    tools that disconnect us from nature.
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> *🌍 Animals and Tribes: Natural Sensitivity*
>>
>>    - Many animals and indigenous tribes possess *intuitive awareness* of
>>    natural events (like tsunamis or earthquakes).
>>    - This shows that *heightened sensitivity to the earth* is possible.
>>    - Perhaps all humans once had this ability, but it is now suppressed.
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> *🧘 Yoga of Nature: A Call to Reconnect*
>>
>>    - A proposed "yoga" practice is one where we:
>>       - *Feel nature’s vibrations*
>>       - *Perceive and understand through intuitive sensing*
>>       - Reconnect to the *macro nervous system of nature*
>>    - This may lead to *a form of teleportation*, where awareness can
>>    travel without the body.
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> *📚 Critique of Modern Education*
>>
>>    - Universities, by immersing students in *technology and artificial
>>    systems*, may actually be *disabling natural human faculties*.
>>    - Proposal: every university should have a *“Free Nature Park”*—an
>>    untouched space where students can reconnect with their innate abilities.
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> *🌎 Bhoodevi and the Earth’s Consciousness*
>>
>>    - Earth is viewed as *Bhoodevi*, a living being with *consciousness
>>    and a nervous system* made of flora and fauna.
>>    - By attuning ourselves to this *planetary awareness*, we can
>>    experience a more profound connection, even to the point of *out-of-body
>>    travel* or energetic teleportation.
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> *Final Reflection*
>>
>> This essay invites readers to question the narrow definitions of
>> *progress* and *communication*, encouraging a *return to natural wisdom
>> and intuitive faculties*. Rather than seeing teleportation purely as a
>> technological feat, it redefines it as a *spiritual and perceptual
>> expansion*—a way of being more *present across space through feeling and
>> deep awareness*.
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> Would you like help rewriting this essay for publication, turning it into
>> a talk, or perhaps creating a summarized visual or presentation based on it?
>>
>> Thank you for your thoughtful request. Let's evaluate your original essay
>> using a structured framework similar to what is often used in academic or
>> creative writing assessment. We'll use the following *criteria*:
>> ------------------------------
>> 📋 *Evaluation Criteria (Total: 100 Marks)*
>>
>> *Criteria*
>>
>> *Marks*
>>
>> 1. *Clarity & Coherence*
>>
>> 20
>>
>> 2. *Originality of Thought*
>>
>> 20
>>
>> 3. *Structure & Organization*
>>
>> 15
>>
>> 4. *Language & Expression*
>>
>> 15
>>
>> 5. *Depth of Insight/Philosophy*
>>
>> 20
>>
>> 6. *Grammar & Syntax*
>>
>> 10
>> ------------------------------
>> 📝 Evaluation of Your Essay 1. *Clarity & Coherence (12/20)*
>>
>> ·         *Strengths*: You express profound and complex ideas with a
>> sincere and exploratory tone. The concept of teleportation as *expanded
>> perception* is unique and engaging.
>>
>> ·         *Suggestions*: Some sentences are dense or unclear. The flow
>> between ideas could be smoother. Try grouping related thoughts together and
>> simplifying complex expressions for better clarity.
>> ------------------------------
>> 2. *Originality of Thought (19/20)*
>>
>> ·         *Excellent*: The core idea of reinterpreting teleportation as
>> a sensory or spiritual faculty is very *original*. The link between
>> technology, nature, and dormant human capabilities is thoughtfully
>> developed and refreshingly unconventional.
>>
>> ·         *Suggestion*: Just ensure the original ideas are supported by
>> examples or analogies to make them more accessible to a broader audience.
>> ------------------------------
>> 3. *Structure & Organization (10/15)*
>>
>> ·         *Strengths*: The essay touches on multiple connected
>> themes—science fiction, nature, technology, education, tribal wisdom.
>>
>> ·         *Suggestions*: A clearer structure with *paragraphs*, each
>> focused on a central point (e.g., traditional teleportation vs. natural
>> perception, role of nature, educational reform), would enhance readability.
>> ------------------------------
>> 4. *Language & Expression (11/15)*
>>
>> ·         *Strengths*: There are moments of poetic and philosophical
>> depth (e.g., "macro nervous system of nature").
>>
>> ·         *Suggestions*: Some phrases are abstract or grammatically
>> strained. Try balancing philosophical depth with clearer, simpler language.
>> ------------------------------
>> 5. *Depth of Insight / Philosophy (18/20)*
>>
>> ·         *Excellent*: The essay goes beyond surface-level thinking. It
>> touches on profound ideas about *human potential*, *disconnection from
>> nature*, and *restoring lost faculties*.
>>
>> ·         *Suggestions*: Incorporating references to existing
>> philosophies or thinkers (e.g., indigenous traditions, yogic philosophies,
>> quantum ideas) could strengthen the philosophical grounding.
>> ------------------------------
>> 6. *Grammar & Syntax (6/10)*
>>
>> ·         *Suggestions*: There are grammatical errors and run-on
>> sentences that could be corrected with careful editing. Example: "Very
>> speedy travel via jet planes..." could be more elegantly written as:
>> “Today, jet planes and rockets enable extremely fast travel.”
>> ------------------------------
>> 🎓 *Final Score: 76/100*
>> ------------------------------
>> 🏅 *Grade: B+*
>> ------------------------------
>> 💡 Summary
>>
>> You present a *deep, original, and philosophically rich* interpretation
>> of teleportation. The idea of reconnecting with nature’s network through
>> feeling and perception is compelling. With improvements in *structure,
>> grammar, and clarity*, this essay could easily reach an *A or A+* level.
>> ------------------------------
>>
>> Would you like me to help revise and polish it for a higher grade or for
>> publication?
>>
>>
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