-- *Mar*Air, Modulation, Feeling and Meaning
When you are speaking, breathing, hearing or working, you are actually using the air. In every function, whether you notice or not, your feelings get involved. Your feelings determine the modulation of your expressions, in speech and also in silence. Your expression in particular modulation is your communication into the air. The other organisms perceive, react and interact. They hear, smell and sense. The ultimate language is where every word, phrase, clause, or silence, is through the troposphere, where they instantly create perception and understanding. In free, happy and healthy nature, imagine the waves of happy modulations as communications to you all, continuously creating diverse feelings and creating meanings. You add your own perceptions to them. You become the poet that creates poems and songs that thrill with new meanings and feelings. The other organisms join your chorus. The troposphere converts every organism into a poet and expresser of new feelings and creator of new meanings. Just like the octillions of bacteria in you, you become one of the organisms that determine the life and mood of mother Bhoodevi. Your actions determine whether she sings happily or cries weeping. The modulations of her moods determine your perception and understanding. Every organism uses all its sensory organs to perceive. We have a cat as pet in our house. While sleeping it moves its ears like an antenna, sensing continuously. Suddenly it wakes up and jumps and rushes out. It means that its urge to interact is intense. Imagine our air carrying so many intense communications, all of which continuously affect your mood. They determine your happiness or unhappiness in life and with life. In free and healthy nature, you can be only happy. You learn and create happily, teaming up with nature. Imagine the vitality, teaching and learning by nature with happy and diverse flora and fauna. Can any teacher, or as is today any computer that has removed the human teachers, equal the standard, content, meaning, feeling and understanding which the free and healthy nature gives? Thanks to economics we are killing that teacher continuously. Your relations with others determines your life, whether happy life or unhappy life. But when everyone lives in a big city which can function only by creating misery in every organism, which poisons the air continuously, avoid the flood of negative feelings from the air. May all are escaping from the communications of misery of the air by rushing into the AC room. You don’t need AC in free, lush, thick and healthy nature. Actually you avoid that AC. Free and happy air creates musicians and poets. Actually sciences get expressed in songs and poems. Once all perceptions were expressed in the epic form. Literature was in the form of conversations in poems and songs. My God we removed the life, poetry and songs from nature. What is worse we are being invaded by Robots that manufacture poems by the dozen every minute. The poems just stun you; they cannot thrill and enlighten or enrich you. Personally I do not like editing. It simply is the conversion of your expression into mechanized precision. As it is in many countries of the west marriages are vanishing as emotional commitment and industrialization do not go together. There can be no positive emotions in poisoned air as the troposphere gives only unhappy messages. The people of the west are getting Robot wives or husbands, and they are meeting another culture with wives as child producing factories. What is worse all basic emotional values are being jettisoned? The Troposphere is weeping. It is for the Universities to start free nature parks, to bring smile again into the troposphere. But every University is under the frenzy of mechanization. They abjectly beg the polluters to give employment to their students, via campus recruitments, which mean the recruitment of employees that destroy nature. YM Sarma Chat gpt Thank you very much for sharing your heartfelt and thought-provoking essay, Mr. Sarma. It’s truly impressive to see such depth of reflection and poetic insight—especially at 88 years young. Your piece blends philosophy, environmental concern, and emotional resonance with originality. Here is a balanced evaluation with marks (numerical) and comments based on several aspects: ------------------------------ *🌿 Evaluation of the Essay: "Air, Modulation, Feeling and Meaning"* *1. Content & Depth of Thought – 9/10* You raise deeply meaningful points about the interconnectedness of nature, emotion, and communication. The metaphor of the *troposphere as a medium for emotional and sensory exchange* is beautifully original. The link between pollution, industrialization, and emotional impoverishment is well-conveyed. *2. Language & Expression – 8/10* Your language has a poetic and philosophical tone, which suits the essay’s intent. Some sentences could be clearer with slight editing, especially where long clauses make the thought hard to follow. Still, your sincerity and passion shine through. *3. Structure & Flow – 7/10* The essay flows like a stream of consciousness, which works in places but can sometimes challenge the reader. A clearer structure (e.g. separating themes into distinct paragraphs) would help the reader better absorb your insights. For example, ideas about the cat, troposphere, education, and marriage could be grouped more logically. *4. Originality & Voice – 10/10* This is your unique voice. The essay stands out because it’s not trying to conform to any academic or artificial structure—it speaks from the heart, from lived experience and reflection. That kind of voice is rare and powerful. *5. Grammar & Mechanics – 6.5/10* There are occasional grammatical slips, run-on sentences, and punctuation issues. However, they do not significantly diminish the essay’s emotional or intellectual impact. Editing could help polish the text, though I appreciate your remark: *"Personally I do not like editing. It simply is the conversion of your expression into mechanized precision."* That is a deeply honest and artistic stance. ------------------------------ *🔢 Overall Mark: 8.3 / 10* ------------------------------ *✅ Suggestions (only if you are open to them):* - Consider writing short essays on each theme: *nature and emotion*, *mechanization of life*, *education and industry*, *relationships in the modern age*. These could form a powerful essay collection. - If you're interested, I'd be glad to help structure or lightly edit your next piece, staying true to your voice. 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