On Tue, Aug 28 2018, "Callum R. Davies" <c...@crdavies.eu> wrote: > Hi, just a couple of nits in ifconfig.8 that I found whilst struggling > to get a route to fe80::1 on a VPS. > > 'colon-separated' and 'comma-separated' is in keeping with the style of > the rest of the page. > > 'lowest 64th bit' > 'lowest 64 bits' is self-explanatory, I hope.
ok jca@ > Index: ifconfig.8 > =================================================================== > RCS file: /cvs/src/sbin/ifconfig/ifconfig.8,v > retrieving revision 1.317 > diff -u -p -r1.317 ifconfig.8 > --- ifconfig.8 13 Aug 2018 05:54:13 -0000 1.317 > +++ ifconfig.8 28 Aug 2018 03:00:39 -0000 > @@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ a host name present in the host name dat > .Xr hosts 5 ; > .Dq dot > notation (IPv4); > -colon separated (IPv6); > +colon-separated (IPv6); > or CIDR notation. > .It Ar dest_address > Specify the address of the correspondent on the other end > @@ -838,7 +838,7 @@ and > Create a load balancing group consisting of up to 32 nodes. > Each node is specified as a > .Ar vhid:advskew > -tuple in a comma separated list. > +tuple in a comma-separated list. > .It Cm carpdev Ar iface > Attach to parent interface > .Ar iface . > @@ -1217,7 +1217,7 @@ Currently configured addresses will not > invalid. > .It Cm eui64 > Fill the interface index > -.Pq the lowermost 64th bit of an IPv6 address > +.Pq the lowermost 64 bits of an IPv6 address > automatically. > .It Cm pltime Ar n > Set preferred lifetime for the address, in seconds. > -- jca | PGP : 0x1524E7EE / 5135 92C1 AD36 5293 2BDF DDCC 0DFA 74AE 1524 E7EE
