Hi, just a couple of nits in ifconfig.8 that I found whilst struggling
to get a route to fe80::1 on a VPS.

'colon-separated' and 'comma-separated' is in keeping with the style of
the rest of the page.

'lowest 64th bit' > 'lowest 64 bits' is self-explanatory, I hope.

Index: ifconfig.8
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RCS file: /cvs/src/sbin/ifconfig/ifconfig.8,v
retrieving revision 1.317
diff -u -p -r1.317 ifconfig.8
--- ifconfig.8  13 Aug 2018 05:54:13 -0000      1.317
+++ ifconfig.8  28 Aug 2018 03:00:39 -0000
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ a host name present in the host name dat
 .Xr hosts 5 ;
 .Dq dot
 notation (IPv4);
-colon separated (IPv6);
+colon-separated (IPv6);
 or CIDR notation.
 .It Ar dest_address
 Specify the address of the correspondent on the other end
@@ -838,7 +838,7 @@ and
 Create a load balancing group consisting of up to 32 nodes.
 Each node is specified as a
 .Ar vhid:advskew
-tuple in a comma separated list.
+tuple in a comma-separated list.
 .It Cm carpdev Ar iface
 Attach to parent interface
 .Ar iface .
@@ -1217,7 +1217,7 @@ Currently configured addresses will not 
 invalid.
 .It Cm eui64
 Fill the interface index
-.Pq the lowermost 64th bit of an IPv6 address
+.Pq the lowermost 64 bits of an IPv6 address
 automatically.
 .It Cm pltime Ar n
 Set preferred lifetime for the address, in seconds.

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