On Sun, Sep 12, 2010 at 12:22:25PM -0700, Chris Palmer wrote:
> I recently set up a CRYPTO volume with softraid(4) and enjoyed it. Thanks!
> 
> Here are some hopefully-clarifying diffs to the man pages.
> 

feedback from softraid people please...

> 
> --- bioctl.8.orig     Sat Sep 11 19:55:27 2010
> +++ bioctl.8  Sun Sep 12 12:17:30 2010
> @@ -119,7 +119,7 @@
>  promote it to being a
>  .Dq Hot Spare .
>  .It Fl h
> -Where necessary, produce "human-readable" output.
> +Where necessary, produce ``human-readable'' output.

er, ...

>  Use unit suffixes: Byte, Kilobyte, Megabyte,
>  Gigabyte, Terabyte, Petabyte, Exabyte in order to reduce the number of
>  digits to four or less.
> @@ -202,7 +202,7 @@
>  RAID 4 and RAID 5 require at least three devices,
>  and the CRYPTO discipline requires exactly one.
>  .It Fl d
> -Delete volume specified by device.
> +Detach volume specified by device.

softraid people?

>  .It Fl k Ar keydisk
>  Use special device
>  .Ar keydisk
> @@ -224,6 +224,7 @@
>  .It Fl r Ar rounds
>  When creating an encrypted volume, specifies the number of iterations of
>  the algorithm used to convert a passphrase into a key.
> +(The algorithm is PBKDF2.)

if correct, we can probably say:

...the algorithm used (PBKDF2) to convert...
but someone confirm, please.

>  Higher iteration counts take more time, but offer more resistance to key
>  guessing attacks.
>  The minimum is 1000 rounds and the default is 8192.
> @@ -245,20 +246,19 @@
>  .Ed
>  .Pp
>  .Nm
> -will ask for a passphrase, that will be needed to unlock the encrypted
> -disk.
> +will ask for the passphrase needed to unlock the encrypted disk.
>  After creating a newly encrypted disk, the first megabyte of it should be
>  zeroed, so tools like
>  .Xr fdisk 8
>  or
>  .Xr disklabel 8
>  don't get confused by the random data that appears on the new disk.
> -This can be done with the following command (assuming the new disk is sd3):
> +This can be done with the following command (assuming the new disk is sd2):
>  .Bd -literal -offset 3n
> -# dd if=/dev/zero of=/dev/rsd3c bs=1m count=1
> +# dd if=/dev/zero of=/dev/rsd2c bs=1m count=1

er, ...

>  .Ed
>  .Pp
> -Deleting a softraid volume requires the exact volume name.
> +Detaching a softraid volume requires the exact volume name.

softraid people, please.

>  For example:
>  .Bd -literal -offset 3n
>  # bioctl -d sd2
> @@ -267,6 +267,8 @@
>  .Xr bio 4 ,
>  .Xr scsi 4 ,
>  .Xr softraid 4
> +.Pp
> +RFC 2898 describes PBKDF2.

we can probably expand this.

>  .Sh HISTORY
>  The
>  .Nm
> @@ -278,4 +280,4 @@
>  interface was written by
>  .An Marco Peereboom Aq ma...@openbsd.org .
>  .Sh CAVEATS
> -Use of the crypto & RAID 4/5 disciplines are currently considered 
> experimental.
> +Use of the CRYPTO and RAID 4/5 disciplines are currently considered 
> experimental.
> 
> 
> --- softraid.4.orig   Sun Sep 12 12:13:10 2010
> +++ softraid.4        Sun Sep 12 12:14:50 2010
> @@ -119,6 +119,9 @@
>  # printf "a\en\en\en\enRAID\enw\enq\en\en" | disklabel -E wd3
>  .Ed
>  .Pp
> +(Note that RAID is also the correct partition type when using the CRYPTO
> +discipline.)
> +.Pp

this page already states:

        A chunk is a partition or storage area of fstype ``RAID''.
        disklabel(8) is used to alter the fstype.

this is pretty clear, no?

jmc

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