Bug#782695: Bug#782404: release-notes: re-proofreading

2015-04-19 Thread Niels Thykier
On 2015-04-18 21:43, Andreas Tille wrote: > On Sat, Apr 18, 2015 at 08:13:29PM +0100, Justin B Rye wrote: >> My attempt: >> >> +The Debian Med team has again considerably increased not only the >> number >> +of packages in the fields of biology and medicine but also their >> quality in >>

Bug#782695: Bug#782404: release-notes: re-proofreading

2015-04-18 Thread Andreas Tille
On Sat, Apr 18, 2015 at 08:13:29PM +0100, Justin B Rye wrote: > My attempt: > > +The Debian Med team has again considerably increased not only the > number > +of packages in the fields of biology and medicine but also their quality > in > +terms of testing (at package build time as w

Bug#782695: Bug#782404: release-notes: re-proofreading

2015-04-18 Thread Justin B Rye
Niels Thykier wrote in #782404: > I just applied the patch in #782695 and I hope I can convince you to > review it as well. :) At a first glance I thought that patch only needed a couple of trivial fixes - the spelling of "fulfil", some phrasing tweaks - but once I'd taken it apart I couldn't get

Bug#782404: release-notes: re-proofreading

2015-04-11 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: release-notes Severity: minor Tags: patch Revisions to issues.dbk introduce a couple of phrases that could benefit from extra articles and maybe a change of preposition: For more information about the requirements, please refer to -section called "REQUIREMENTS" in the https://so