Package: release-notes
Severity: minor
Tags: patch
Revisions to issues.dbk introduce a couple of phrases that could
benefit from extra articles and maybe a change of preposition:
For more information about the requirements, please refer to
- section called "REQUIREMENTS" in the <ulink
+ the section called "REQUIREMENTS" in the <ulink
url="https://sources.debian.net/src/systemd/jessie/README/";>README</ulink>
- file of <systemitem role="package">systemd</systemitem> package.
+ file for the package <systemitem role="package">systemd</systemitem>.
(Meanwhile I'm following #780573 and see no problems with the new
material there yet.)
--
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
Index: issues.dbk
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--- issues.dbk (revision 10757)
+++ issues.dbk (working copy)
@@ -516,9 +516,9 @@
</para>
<para>
For more information about the requirements, please refer to
- section called "REQUIREMENTS" in the <ulink
+ the section called "REQUIREMENTS" in the <ulink
url="https://sources.debian.net/src/systemd/jessie/README/";>README</ulink>
- file of <systemitem role="package">systemd</systemitem> package.
+ file for the package <systemitem role="package">systemd</systemitem>.
</para>
</section>
