Scott, Thank for you review and feedback. See my response embedded below, prefixed with "JG-".
Thanks, -- JG James Gould Fellow Engineer [email protected] <applewebdata://13890C55-AAE8-4BF3-A6CE-B4BA42740803/[email protected]> 703-948-3271 12061 Bluemont Way Reston, VA 20190 Verisign.com <http://verisigninc.com/> On 3/30/26, 2:55 PM, "Scott Hollenbeck" <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: Caution: This email originated from outside the organization. Do not click links or open attachments unless you recognize the sender and know the content is safe. Minor feedback: In Section 3, I recommend adding a reference to RFC 7301 (Transport Layer Security (TLS) Application-Layer Protocol Negotiation Extension) as shown below: "Mapping EPP session management facilities onto the QUIC service is accomplished with a combination of a QUIC connection with the "EoQ" ALPN [RFC 7301] value" JG-Yes, the reference to RFC 7301 will be added. The second paragraph in this section refers to an "eoq/1.0" ALPN value. Please ensure that this text and the text in the first paragraph is consistent. JG-Thanks, this is a mistake. The second paragraph will change "eoq/1.0" to "EoQ" with the same RFC 7301 reference ""EoQ" ALPN [RFC 7301] value". The second-to-last paragraph in this section notes that "EoQ support is indicated by selecting the Application-Layer Protocol Negotiation (ALPN) token "EoQ" in the crypto handshake'. RFC 7301 doesn't include the word "token" at all. I'm not sure of what's correct here, but this text should also be consistent with the text found earlier in this section. JG-This will be changed to "EoQ support is indicated by selecting the "EoQ" ALPN [RFC 7301] value in the crypto handshake' to be consistent. In Section 11, please add a comma after my surname (Scott Hollenbeck, Lucas Pardue). JG-Thanks, that will be addressed. Scott Hollenbeck SAHollenbeck LLC _______________________________________________ regext mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
