progwolff added a comment.

  Marked some typos. Note that I am not a native speaker, so please re-check 
them.
  
  Besides that, looks good to me.

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> CardsGridViewGallery.qml:61
> +            wrapMode: Text.WordWrap
> +            text: "The Kirigami types AbstractCard and Card are used to 
> implement the popular Card pattern used on many mobile and web platforms that 
> is used to display a collection of information or actions.\n Besides the Card 
> components, Kirigami offers also 3 kinds of views and positioners to help to 
> present cards with beautiful and responsive layouts.\n\nIn this page, 
> CardsGridView shows an example on how to put cards in a grid view, generated 
> by a Qt model.\nThe behavior is same as CardsLayout, and it allowes cards to 
> be put in one or two columns depending from the available 
> width.\nCardsGridView has the limitation that every Card must have the same 
> exact height, so cellHeight must be manually set to a value in which the 
> content fits for every item.\nIf possible use cards only when you don't need 
> to instantiate that many and use CardsLayout intead."
> +        }

If I'm not wrong: allowes -> allows

> CardsLayoutGallery.qml:78
> +                    wrapMode: Text.WordWrap
> +                    text: "An AbstractCard is the simplest form of card. Its 
> just a rectangle with a shadow, which can contain any Item in it. It can also 
> have items assigned to the Header or Footer properties. in this case a 
> Kirigami.Heading is its header and a Label with WordWrap is the contentItem."
> +                }

Its just a -> It's just a
. in -> . In

> CardsLayoutGallery.qml:87
> +                    wrapMode: Text.WordWrap
> +                    text: "This is an AbstractCard with a Label with 
> WordWrap in it and nothing else, it's the simplest form Cards can be found 
> in.\nAn AbstractCard can be clicked itself, with the usual onClicked signal 
> handler and the showClickFeedback property can be used if the click should 
> show any kind of visual feedback. It is recomended to set it to true if you 
> plan to make the card reactive on any kind of click."
> +                }

recomended -> recommended

> CardsLayoutGallery.qml:215
> +                    topPadding: avatarIcon.height/2
> +                    text: "It's possible to customize the look and feel for 
> Cards too, if the no padding behavior for headers is needed. This is usually 
> discouraged in order to have greater consistency, but in some cases the 
> design requires a more fancy layout, as shown in this example of a Card. if a 
> custom header is used, the title and icon in the banner property shouldn't be 
> used. If a custom footer is used (which is discouraged), actions shouldn't be 
> used."
> +                }

. if -> . If

> CardsLayoutGallery.qml:247
> +                    wrapMode: Text.WordWrap
> +                    text: "A card can optionally have horizontal 
> orientation.\n in this case will be wider than tall, so is fit to be used 
> also in a ColumnLayout.\nIf you need to put it in a CardsLayout, it will have 
> by default a columnSpan of 2 (which can be overridden)."
> +                }

.\n in -> .\n In

> CardsListViewGallery.qml:61
> +            wrapMode: Text.WordWrap
> +            text: "The Kirigami types AbstractCard and Card are used to 
> implement the popular Card pattern used on many mobile and web platforms that 
> is used to display a collection of information or actions.\n Besides the Card 
> components, Kirigami offers also 3 kinds of views and positioners to help to 
> present cards with beautiful and responsive layouts.\n\nIn this page, 
> CardsListView is used to do a list view of AbstractCard subclasses with a 
> custom layout inside.\n CardsListView should be used only with cards which 
> can look good at any horizontal size, so It is recommended to use directly 
> AbstractCard with an appropriate layout inside, because they are stretching 
> for the whole list width.\nTherefore is discouraged to use it with the Card 
> type, unless it has Horizontal as headerOrientation.\n The choice between 
> using this view with AbstractCard or a normal ListView with 
> AbstractListItem/BasicListItem is purely a choice based on aestetics alone."
> +        }

so It is -> so it is

REPOSITORY
  R169 Kirigami

REVISION DETAIL
  https://phabricator.kde.org/D11316

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