ngraham added a comment.

  Thanks, looking better.
  
  I don't see explanatory text below the combobox yet; looks like that part 
isn't quite working.
  
  Also, suppose I want to contribute both usage and system information, how do 
I do that? The wording in the combobox implies that I can only contribute one 
or the other. If there are multiple pieces of information that it would make 
sense to send, then a combobox isn't the right control and we'll need to use 
radio buttons or checkboxes--or else we'll need to re-word the options so that 
they reveal the full set of what will be included.

INLINE COMMENTS

> feedback.cpp:41
> +    setAboutData(new KAboutData(QStringLiteral("kcm_feedback"),
> +                                       i18n("Configure User Feedback 
> Settings"),
> +                                       QStringLiteral("1.0"), QString(), 
> KAboutLicense::LGPL));

Title should be the same as the name i.e. "User Feedback"

> feedback.cpp:42
> +                                       i18n("Configure User Feedback 
> Settings"),
> +                                       QStringLiteral("1.0"), QString(), 
> KAboutLicense::LGPL));
> +

Description should be "Configure user feedback settings"

> kcm_feedback.desktop:14
> +Name=User Feedback
> +
> +Categories=Qt;KDE;

Add `Comment=Configure user feedback settings`

> main.qml:23
> +import QtQuick.Layouts 1.1
> +import QtQuick.Controls 2.3 as QtControls
> +import org.kde.kirigami 2.6 as Kirigami

"as QQC2"

> main.qml:41
> +            wrapMode: Text.WordWrap
> +            text: i18n("We make Plasma for you. You can help us improve it 
> by contributing information on how you use it. This allows us to focus on 
> things that matter to you.\n\nContributing usage information is optional and 
> entirely anonymous. It will not associate the data with any kind of unique 
> identifier, and will never track the documents you open, the websites you 
> visit, or any other kind of personal information.\n\nYou can read more about 
> our policy in the following link.")
> +        }

1. Since this is no longer just about Plasma, maybe the first sentence should 
say, "We make software for you".

2. Use kuit formatting for newlines: `xi18nc("@info", "Line 1<nl/>Line 
2<nl/>Line 3<nl/>etc.");`

REPOSITORY
  R120 Plasma Workspace

REVISION DETAIL
  https://phabricator.kde.org/D24011

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