I previously commented, but let me add that I agree with you, Christine. The surfer is leaving the ocean and is separated sufficiently from the small outbound wave so as not to conflict or distract. I prefer, as is true in this case, that the exiting figure be positioned nearer to the approaching frame edge.
Jack --- On Tue, 6/15/10, Christine Aguila <[email protected]> wrote: > From: Christine Aguila <[email protected]> > Subject: Re: PESO - Looking for the Perfect Wave > To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]> > Date: Tuesday, June 15, 2010, 9:47 AM > Hi Brian. The contrasting > textures of the water are nice as is the backlight on the > surfer in silhouette. You caught the stride > of the surfer just right to my eye. Ken makes an > interesting point about the placement of the wave, but I do > like the shot composed as posted. Could go either way > for me. Very nice work. Cheers, Christine > > > > > ----- Original Message ----- From: "Brian Walters" <[email protected]> > To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]> > Sent: Tuesday, June 15, 2010 7:52 AM > Subject: PESO - Looking for the Perfect Wave > > > > I was trying for a very simple composition > here. It's sort of what I > > wanted but not sure if it quite works: > > > > http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1370864/PESO/slides/_IGP7062.html > > > > I cropped some off the top and left. K200D and 55-300 > mm zoom. > > > > Comments welcome. > > > > > > > > Cheers > > > > Brian > > > > ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ > > Brian Walters > > Western Sydney Australia > > http://members.westnet.com.au/brianwal/SL/ > > > > -- > > > > -- http://www.fastmail.fm - One of many happy users: > > http://www.fastmail.fm/docs/quotes.html > > > > > > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > > [email protected] > > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link > directly above and follow the directions. > > > > > > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link > directly above and follow the directions. > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
