I wouldn't try to crop the green thing, but I might clone it out. The  
only thing that bothers me about this is the slightly off center  
vertical. I would rotate the image about 1 degree clockwise. But  
again, I think it's a very nice shot.
Paul
On Jul 10, 2006, at 8:09 PM, Jack Davis wrote:

> I may be giving you more than you are looking for, but I'll comment
> about this image as well.
> Now that I know and can see the pebbles (stones) they don't bother me.
> The white near door frame and dark background bit of wall do detract,
> however.
> The wonderfully shaped jug against the complimentary wall (as  
> placed on
> the stand) and nothing else, seems to me worth trying. How about  
> moving
> the set up to the left to get rid of the "peek-o-boo" green thing?
>
> Jack
>
> --- jim kerslake <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>
>> comments very welcome - thanks.
>>
>> It was supposed to be a 'test' shot, the first time I ever got the
>> 135mm
>> f/3.5 Takumar to work on my new D-SLR
>> (which was a bit heart-stoppingly scary in that horrible
>> techno-stress way)
>> so the result has always been tinged with that triumph!
>>
>> They're just pebbles on an outdoor set of garden shelves -
>> crop was problematic, leaving more in or taking more out..:
>> http://www.jimkerslake.uklinux.net/pentax/bottle_1.jpg
>>
>> Since it's my yard, I could always remove the pebbles and shelf  -
>> the latter mostly falling to bits on their own anyway  ;-)
>>
>> cheers,
>> jim
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "Jack Davis" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
>> To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]>
>> Sent: Monday, July 10, 2006 4:25 PM
>> Subject: Re: just stopping by
>>
>>
>>> Most welcome, Jim,
>>> Very much like your shot. Does the green "thing" at the top edge
>> have
>>> any reason for being? Would be too tight a crop to get rid of it,
>>> obviously.
>>> Unknown clutter at left, while color complimentary, is a bit
>>> distracting.
>>> Wall, jug and stand are very nice elements.
>>> You didn't ask for comments, so hope OK.(?)
>>>
>>> Jack
>>>
>>>
>>> --- jim kerslake <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Just saying Hi, from Yorkshire UK.
>>>> Thought I might join your rather prolific list for so long as my
>>>> mailbox can
>>>> stand it.
>>>>
>>>> I have been taking photos for a couple of months - no idea what
>>>> brought it
>>>> on.  Some kind of madness.
>>>>
>>>> I mostly enjoy using my father's old Pentax Spotmatic F with a
>> broken
>>>> lightmeter.
>>>> I have another Spotmatic (not F) which actually works, but I
>> really
>>>> don't
>>>> enjoy fiddling about with that black metering switch on the side.
>>>>
>>>> I did buy myself a digital SLR recently -
>>>> (not a Pentax - sorry - I wanted anti-shake in the body at a time
>>>> when
>>>> Konica-Minolta was the obvious and very affordable choice),
>>>> but I dunno - I'm more of a film type I think.
>>>> I only really enjoy using the D-SLR when I stick old M42 Asahi
>> Super
>>>> Multi
>>>> Coated Takumar lenses onto it.
>>>> So I consider the results of that to be at least half-Pentax.
>>>>
>>>> I am obsessed with old Takumar lenses, since they seem to have
>>>> magical
>>>> qualities of sharpness mixed with smoothness that I can't get any
>>>> other way.
>>>> They almost seem to "melt" things, like the brickwork here:
>>>> http://www.jimkerslake.uklinux.net/pentax/oiljug.jpg
>>>>
>>>> So - well - Hi then  :-)
>>>>
>>>> -- jim
>>>>
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