Raising the camera would have included some power lines. To the left is a old ugly farm trailer. As far as the seeing the mouth, I never thought of it. ;-) Thanks for the comments, I appreciate it.
Don > -----Original Message----- > From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Behalf Of > Bob W > Sent: Sunday, July 02, 2006 5:05 PM > To: 'Pentax-Discuss Mail List' > Subject: RE: PESO: Breakfast in the Rain. > > > it's a nice scene, and a pleasant change to see a picture taken in the > rain with the muted colours. However, I think the composition could be > better. I don't understand why you have chosen to place the horse > where you have in the frame - it makes it very unbalanced, to no > apparent purpose. I think if you had moved the camera to the left, and > raised it a little, so that the horse was predominantly in the lower > right quadrant, the composition would have been more balanced and > stronger. I would also prefer to have seen the horse's mouth, since > your title stresses the eating. > > -- > Cheers, > Bob > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On > > Behalf Of Don Sanderson > > Sent: 02 July 2006 20:35 > > To: PDML > > Subject: PESO: Breakfast in the Rain. > > > > Taken a few hours ago, a rather dark, drizzly, morning. > > > > http://www.dsanderson.com/Breakfast.htm > > > > A very slight increase to contrast and a bit of USM. > > A little of the left and bottom cropped out. > > > > Comments appreciated. > > > > Don > > > > > > -- > > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > > [email protected] > > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > > > > > > > > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
