it's a nice scene, and a pleasant change to see a picture taken in the rain with the muted colours. However, I think the composition could be better. I don't understand why you have chosen to place the horse where you have in the frame - it makes it very unbalanced, to no apparent purpose. I think if you had moved the camera to the left, and raised it a little, so that the horse was predominantly in the lower right quadrant, the composition would have been more balanced and stronger. I would also prefer to have seen the horse's mouth, since your title stresses the eating.
-- Cheers, Bob > -----Original Message----- > From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On > Behalf Of Don Sanderson > Sent: 02 July 2006 20:35 > To: PDML > Subject: PESO: Breakfast in the Rain. > > Taken a few hours ago, a rather dark, drizzly, morning. > > http://www.dsanderson.com/Breakfast.htm > > A very slight increase to contrast and a bit of USM. > A little of the left and bottom cropped out. > > Comments appreciated. > > Don > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > > > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
