Hi Paul, In many ways this is a more interesting and compelling photo than the earlier one. There seems to be a more engaging story, and the expression on the guy's face really draws me into the scene. Unless you have a reason for showing the woman's rear end, a tighter crop made by lopping off the bottom of the pic just above the horizontal seam that runs above the pockets of the woman's jeans/skirt seems to yield a stronger image. BTW, did you notice the guy's finger nails?
Shel > [Original Message] > From: Paul Stenquist > Here's another look at two of the teens seen in my earlier PESO. This > was shot just before they saw me. The light on the girl's skirt appears > to be sunlight reflected off a window. I could work it out of there and > remove the resulting shadows on her leg, but I rather like it. Again, > it's the FA 35/2. > http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=3408588 > Paul
