Boris,
It may be my monitor, but there are a number of areas
of blocked highlights. (cap, face, neck...).
I would certainly give those facial areas a chance to
reflect the subject's character.
Difficult to draw an opinion as is.
The non-interfering left edge mottled area is
consistent enough not to be that distracting to me.

Jack
 

--- Boris Liberman <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

> Hi!
> 
> http://webaperture.com/gallery/photos/49886
> 
> Two questions:
> 
> 1. I've been doing some editing here... Do you think
> it wasn't overdone?
> 2. Is it a worthy street portrait? How can I
> improve?
> 
> As usual, be brutal but/and honest...
> 
> Thanks in advance.
> 
> Boris
> 
> 



                
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