----- Original Message ----- From: "Cotty"
Subject: TOMAPBCBA - sigh



Had this is idea for a nice pic, and then apathy set it and it all went
down the pan. So I present for you....

Thought Of Making A Picture But Then Couldn't B Arsed

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Comments and criticism welcomed ;-)

I'd have moved the camera a few feet to the right, and taken a slightly higher vantage point. This would have improved the spatial relationship between subject and background. I would also have burned in the top left hand corner a bit to clarify that bit of detail.
Oh yes, I would also have pushed the button.
Sorry for such an unhelpful critique, but you didn't give me much to work with.


William Robb




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