Frank ...

Red filters are neat for darkening the sky, and the added
effect when there are clouds present can often take an
average or mundane scene and turn it into something
dramatic.  Since the lifeguard station will not be moving
any time soon (will it?), you might consider returning to
try for an even more dramatic shot.

The young lady is lost in the photograph, at least on these
small monitors and even smaller JPEG's.  I hope she presents
herself with a stronger presence in the full sized print.

Do you recall what focal length you were using?  I'd think
that with a wider lens (you've a 19mm, right?), moving in
closer, and a more dramatic sky you'd have a more powerful
image.

And yeah, I know, this is what you got, and maybe I
shouldn't give out with the what-if's, but I really believe
that it may be going back to reshoot with some of this in
mind.  As it is, the dark sky is just a dark sky ... no
impact or drama.

shel

frank theriault wrote:
> 
> I've been trying to get a decent shot of this lifeguard station at Toronto's
> Kew Beach for some time now (Toronto has miles of beautiful beaches near
> downtown, but with the heat of summer, they're always polluted, so we can
> only look at the pretty water).
> 
> This may be the best of the old station I've gotten yet - ironically, a
> month ago, in the dead of winter.  I like what the red filter does to the
> sky, and the young lady relaxing on the picnic table adds, I think, I touch
> of whimsy:
> 
> http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=2159925
> 
> Please let me know what you think (as always, the print's way better than
> the scan - oh well...).

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