elharo opened a new pull request, #2040:
URL: https://github.com/apache/maven-resolver/pull/2040

   Rewrites `src/site/markdown/deployment.md` in ASD-STE100 Simplified 
Technical English.
   
   ## Changes
   - Classified the page as descriptive text (no imperative instructions).
   - Removed \"-ing\" verb forms (\"Deploying\", \"leveraging\", \"including\", 
\"is being converted\") and present progressive.
   - Removed passive voice (\"can be achieved\", \"is being written\", \"which 
is called\").
   - Dropped filler (\"probably\") and banned modal \"would\"-style phrasing.
   - Replaced slashes (\"writes/uploads\", \"artifact/metadata\") with \"or\".
   - Split long sentences; every sentence is now at most 20 words.
   - Broke a 4-word noun chain (\"default repository connector 
implementation\").
   - Kept all links, code identifiers, table structure, and the license header 
verbatim.


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