Further minor grammar/typographical errata:

On 04/08/13 11:16 PM, Mike Pagano wrote:
> Title: vanilla-sources stabilization policy
> Author: Mike Pagano <mpag...@gentoo.org>
> Content-Type: text/plain
> Posted: 2013-08-07
> Revision: 1
> News-Item-Format: 1.0
> Display-If-Installed: sys-kernel/vanilla-sources
> 
> The Gentoo Kernel Team will no longer be providing stable
> vanilla-sources kernels. All currently stabilized vanilla-sources
> versions will be dropped to ~arch. The Arch teams, via normal requests
> of the Kernel Team, will continue to stabilize gentoo-sources kernels
> upon request. This decision is based on the facts that upstream is now
> releasing approximately 1-2 vanilla-sources kernels a week. Arch teams,
> understandably, are unable to keep up with this rate of release.  As
> most vanilla releases contain security fixes, the user who only runs
> stable vanilla-sources will consistently be behind and potentially at
> risk.  For the latest "upstream kernel unpatched by Gentoo" kernel, we

> "upstream kernel unpatched by Gentoo" kernel
wat. Possibly intended:
> For the latest upstream kernel unpatched by Gentoo

> recommend users add 'sys-kernel/vanilla-sources' to their
> package.accept_keywords file. gentoo-sources will continue to be a
> tested and supported version for Gentoo users.
> 
> 
> Note: This news item only applies to gentoo-sources and vanilla-sources.
> Other kernels currently maintained in portage have their own policies
> and procedures in place toda
toda? derp. "today" or just remove it.

s/\.  /. /g or s/\. ([^ ])/.  \1/g
(consistently use one space between sentences or two)

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