Minor grammar/typographical errata:

On 04/08/13 12:53 AM, Mike Pagano wrote:
> The Gentoo Kernel Team will no longer be providing stable vanilla-sources
> kernels. All currently stabilized vanilla-sources versions will be dropped
> to ~arch. The Arch teams, via normal requests of the Kernel Team, will
> continue to stabilize gentoo-sources kernels upon request. This decision is
> based on the facts that upstream is now releasing approximately 1-2 vanilla-
try not to wrap vanilla-sources on the hyphen if possible
> sources kernels a week. Arch teams, understandable, are unable to keep up with
s/understandable/understandably/
> this rate of release.  As most vanilla releases contain security fixes, the
> user who only runs stable vanilla-sources will consistently be behind and
> potentially at risk.  For the latest upstream non Gentoo patched vanilla
s/non Gentoo patched/non-Gentoo-patched/ or "upstream kernel unpatched
by Gentoo"
> kernel, we recommend user add 'sys-kernel/vanilla-sources' to their
s/user add/adding/;s/their/the/ or similar; "recommend user add" is not
grammatically correct
> package.accept_keywords file.  Gentoo-sources will continue to be a tested and
s/Gentoo-sources/gentoo-sources/
> supported version for Gentoo users.

s/\.  /. /g

(or vice versa)

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