A couple things I noted:
(1)
In News Item Identities we have the following date format,
> Each news item will have a unique identifier. This identifier will be
> in the form ``yyyy-mm-dd-short-name``

Later in "News Item Headers" we have an other in order to be compatable
with GLEP 1.
> ``Posted:``
>     Date of posting, in ``dd-mmm-yyyy`` format (e.g. 14-Aug-2001)

Is there any reason why we can't keep all the dates in the GLEP 1 date
format? IMHO this helps prevent confusion.

(2)
> Checks for new news messages should be displayed:
>
> * After an ``emerge sync``
> * After an ``emerge --pretend``
Add:
  * Before an ``emerge --ask`` 'yes||no' response
I don't know if this is implied but I think it should be explicitly
stated  
> * Before an ``emerge <target>`` (which may also include a red warning
message)

(3)
Could you be more verbose in the 'News Item Removal' section.  I ask
because what would be considered "no longer relevant".  I think the case
where a router(or similar) box is not updated for >6mths must be
considered.  The Admin may have very well forgot about some particular
News Item, and if it is removed, this box will 'miss' the News Item.

May I suggest only removing news Items after all the packages in the
Display-If-(Installed|Profile) slots are no longer in the tree.

Just a lowely ATs opinion
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