On Sun, Sep 7, 2025 at 1:14 PM Justin Mclean <[email protected]> wrote:
> Hi, > > I’ve created a slide deck that translates the Mentor Onboarding Guide into > a visual format: > > https://training.apache.org/presentations/apache/incubator/mentors/index.html Hi: This is is a very useful outline and study tool. Just a few notes: In general: the layout, with everything up at the top, suggests that something is missing in the body of many slides. Why is the 'Back' arrow in grey until you hover over it? Grey sort of implies that the control is disabled. Slide 1: should have the title of the presentation. The welcome message does not look like a title, 3:: "...make ASF unique" should be "...make The ASF unique" . Same issue on other slides. "The" is a formal part of the Foundation name, so we use it when talking about the Foundation. We do not have to use it when it is an adjective, as in "ASF values" 7: "Red flags to watch" should be "Red flags to watch for" 17: "...Name to Promote Vendor Products" should be "...name to promote vendor products" 32: "Votes enable consensus" is a debatable statement. Votes can end an attempt to achieve consensus between factions that disagree on the best thing to do on this issue. 41: "Due quarterly..." should be on its own line 44: what is "Repeated release"? 56 'One person doing all work" should be "One person doing all the work" hth a Andrew Wetmore Assistant VP, Marketing and Publicity, The ASF <http://aparch.org> Editor-Writer, Infra team, The ASF Editor, moosehousepress.com <https://www.avast.com/sig-email?utm_medium=email&utm_source=link&utm_campaign=sig-email&utm_content=webmail> Virus-free.www.avast.com <https://www.avast.com/sig-email?utm_medium=email&utm_source=link&utm_campaign=sig-email&utm_content=webmail> <#DAB4FAD8-2DD7-40BB-A1B8-4E2AA1F9FDF2>
